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Roughing It

Aug 26, 2008 03:09

Title: Roughing It
Author: kousuke_blade
Fandom: Harry Potter
Characters: Sev/Lily, mentions of James/Lily
Summary: At the age of nine, Lily taught Severus how to pitch a tent.
Rating: PG-13 for sexuality
Disclaimer: Don't own it.
Notes: Un-betaed so please forgive any mistakes. I wrote this on my cruise and it's my first completed Harry Potter fic so my first ( Read more... )

pairing: snape/lily, rating: pg-13, fanfiction: harry potter, pairing: james/lily

Comments 11

nik_nak_1012 August 26 2008, 11:38:28 UTC

This was lovely. ♥ I would leave a more detailed review, but all I can say is that it was just perfect, haha.

erethesunrises August 26 2008, 17:40:31 UTC

Oh, thank you! That is wonderfully detailed, actually. Just what I wanted to hear. :D

chocoluvr August 26 2008, 15:18:33 UTC

Good story showing Snape's feelings for Lily.

erethesunrises August 26 2008, 17:41:03 UTC

Thanks very much! I'm glad I got that across well enough.

mscaitlinpotter August 26 2008, 18:55:38 UTC

Oh, Staciekins! Your poor heart must've been crying by the end of this, m'dear.

But I really did enjoy it, as little as I enjoy Sev/Lily, I loved this particular bit.

erethesunrises August 26 2008, 19:00:05 UTC

As per usual when it comes to these two. -squishes them-

I'm glad you liked it. I surprised myself by writing Sev/Lily because I'm such an avid James/Lily kind of gal. But I had fun so all is well.

<3!

mscaitlinpotter August 26 2008, 19:04:14 UTC

Well, Ilu. :3

shyfoxling September 2 2008, 07:17:05 UTC

I liked these bits:

he would [do?] as she bid, no questions asked. If he pleased her, proved time and time again that she could rely on him, then perhaps matters would solve themselves.

Oh Severus, if only it were that easy.

He felt the warmth of her body radiating against him and wondered if his trousers had always been this tight.

Mmmm...

“I’m not, though. I have James -” Did she realize she had just impaled him with a javelin?

Oh, Lily. Apparently not!

erethesunrises September 3 2008, 00:08:15 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. It is quite angsty in the end. These poor kids. Woe.

whichcraft January 1 2009, 07:36:36 UTC

That was so sweet and sad, Stacie...I can call you Stacie on here, right? ;]

The beginning was cute, and I feel so bad for Sevvy. But it was his bad choice. If he hadn't lost his temper, or James hadn't pushed him that far, they might've ended up having something.

It's an oh-so-bittersweet story, Lily and Severus. <3

erethesunrises January 1 2009, 08:57:57 UTC

Yeeeeah. Totally. Or Anastasia. Whichever.

I'm such a hardcore James/Lily shipper so Sev and Lily aren't allowed to have anything past fifth year. xD But I love entertaining the idea of the first (nearly) five years. I'm glad you liked it though!