FIC: Completion, Imperfect

[wisheswerefish]

Cory/Shawn, G.

You’ll never know, he thinks, staring across the table at you, so comfortable and familiar in your presence that he feels no embarrassment, even if you happen to glance up and catch his eyes. There’s too much between you for that sort of connection to create any awkwardness.

He studies every line of your achingly well-known face,

Comments

[ismenetruth]

Well, I think the POV works, but I'm the one who issued the challenge, so I don't know how unbiased I am.

Also, as always, I love your Cory. <3

[wisheswerefish]

Well, my life is complete, then, if I've pleased you, oh demanding one.

*looks shifty* The cookies were awesome

[dariclone]

Lovely observations on both Shawn and Cory and in my opinion the PoV works.

[wisheswerefish]

Yay! Thanks so much for that; it was the one thing I was worried about.

[tigriswolf]

Oh, achingly lovely.