Love and Us

Feb 15, 2010 22:40

Author: wishinthebox aka Muti
Pairing/Characters: YooSu
Length: One-shot
Summary: Yoochun and junsu’s teacher student relationship got ruined with Jealous!Yoochun what will happened to their relationship? Will it over?
a/n: this is my first English fanfic, sorry If there’s any mistake in grammar and vocab. i’m not asking my friend to beta this ( Read more... )

r: pg13, p: yoosu, fanfic, l: one-shot, love and us

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Comments 17

one_nee February 15 2010, 16:44:03 UTC
ooooohhh... i'm a bit worried u going to make this so angsty, i'm so glad yoochun n junsu can solve it, but poor junsu, he got sick bcoz of yoochun (bad yoochun)...
oh, btw, am i first ? yeay!

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wishinthebox February 15 2010, 22:41:40 UTC
I dont have any heart to make them break up hehe.
Thanks for reading

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purpleinpink February 15 2010, 18:11:07 UTC
:') aww..su is being so sweet. and so is chun. glad to could make each other understand ^^

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wishinthebox February 16 2010, 05:40:41 UTC
yeah yoosu is sweet :)
thanks for reading ^^

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chevyportia February 15 2010, 19:46:39 UTC
Honey, you so need a beta reader. I mean, really. The plot is very clear.

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wishinthebox February 16 2010, 05:41:20 UTC
i thought i really need one..
so many mistake hehe
and the plot is very clear hmmm..
thanks for coming ^^

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missyoosu February 15 2010, 19:51:45 UTC
Hey, Muti! Congrats on a successful first English fanfic. I hope there will be more in the future.

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wishinthebox February 16 2010, 05:41:47 UTC
ea... thanks for coming ^^
hope i have time to write hehehehe

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awshin February 16 2010, 01:57:04 UTC
Jealous Yoochun. Lol. Junsu should have tried to explain in the first place and not go along with the break up. Anyway, thanks for writing this!

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wishinthebox February 16 2010, 05:42:38 UTC
hey...
thanks for coming too..
yeah Su has to explain it first so no break up word at all...
hahaha

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