An Albatross Sings part 3

Feb 24, 2013 21:23

Title: An Albatross Sings Part Three
Pairing: None for now
Wordcount: 9k+
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Language, Character Death
Summery: Those few who sacrifice for the good of the many, they are the strongest the world will ever know.

This is for aishitaeru
special guest beta isyotm

Part three )

an albatross sings, jonghyun, r, pg-15

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wishunew February 25 2013, 02:24:20 UTC
spot for aishitaeru

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wishunew February 25 2013, 02:24:52 UTC
spot for isyotm

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wishunew February 25 2013, 02:25:14 UTC
spot for deepgashes

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imvus February 25 2013, 03:20:47 UTC
omg you updated!!!! I will be back later to read!!!!

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wishunew February 26 2013, 23:55:55 UTC
*waits with cookies for your return*

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imvus February 28 2013, 05:37:41 UTC
Yeah cookie!!

But no cookie was needed for this story. This was wonderful. I love all the details you have written, it really shapes the story in a way that makes me feel like I am right there. I also didn't expect the changes in Taemin and Key or the hesitation in Minho. (I had to giggle when Onew was comparing his body with Taemin and Key's)

Isis is a mystery, I can only suspect that she is a typical God and though has a soft side, I think the price may be larger then they really realize (maybe why Minho seems hesitate about them becoming acolytes ) I am so glad that Taemin was brought back because this story really does fit so well with all five of them.

I am glad Onew is staying close and being Jonghyun's eyes. It fits him well and allows him to be closer to Jonghyun. Though I know Minho has his place next to Jonghyun I want Onew to have a fair chance too.

I have enjoyed this so much that when you are done with the story I know I am going to start it all over and read it from the beginning again.

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alexilaihoroxx February 25 2013, 07:18:46 UTC
I am shocked this doesn't have more comments. I just read all three parts in one sitting, and when you combine epic fantasy/adventure/magic so thoroughly well written with my favorite boys, it's just...amazing. I honestly have no words for how much I loved this story, and I honestly cannot wait for the next part. I look forward to it, because this is seriously amazing! <3 And I have a weakness for handicaps, so the fact that Jonghyun can no longer see is just. I love this fic so much that, like I said, I have no words for it.

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wishunew February 27 2013, 00:25:17 UTC
omg are you okay? all three parts are long

this story is my baby. i love it even if no one else does.
hopefully the next part will be up sometimes in march, with work, my writing time has been cut down, and this story took so long to write without the added distractions orz

thanks for reading!

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alexilaihoroxx February 27 2013, 01:31:17 UTC
Tired, but otherwise unharmed. LOL It was definitely worth it!

I wish you the best of luck with work, and I'd honestly wait years, no rush. It is worth the wait. XD

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