Solo

[wispwolf123]

Title: Solo

Pairing: Altair with mentions of Malik

Rating: MA 15+

Disclaimer: Don’t own anything.

Summary: Altair is still a man underneath the weapon.

Comments

[bampy]

D'awe, Lonely Alty. It's okaaaayyy, Malmal will be there for yoooouuu, as will Maria. D:

I found a rather obvious mistake: "slowly up the bass of his spine" you used the wrong "Base".

[assassin_lucy]

Aww. Sad, really. Wonderfully bittersweet. Hope you don't mind, but is "that would pull him close and hands that use to stroke" supposed to have "used" instead of "use"?

[wispwolf123]

Lol thanks! Both will be fixed.

[galerian_ash]

Such a sad little story, you managed to convey the feeling of desolation and regret very well. I really loved the "But what Altair missed most was Malik's soft, smooth voice that could, without fail convince him that it was ok to stop being a weapon and just be a man if only for just a little while." bit.

[wispwolf123]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed :)