The End of a Road and the Beginning of a Crossroads
Author: wit_worry_what
Rating: PG, I think
Word count: 1,407
Summary: Allison finally meets the man she has been looking for. He must make a choice; maybe he'll make a better one than she did... (I swear it's better than the summary)
Pairing: Jack/Ianto, OFC
Spoilers: End of Days
Song: Color
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Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading this btw, I haven't been on LJ in weeks, basically because I'm lazy and forgetful XD
Hope you'll post more stuff soon, it was fun to read :)
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I have already written another story and have just sort of created a series kind of thing. I am pretty excited. I will get one of those posted before the 19th (when I head back to school - ugh!). I PROMISE. I really will do it. To be honest I am more trying to convince myself rather than tell you! Sorry.
Thanks again for reviewing. This really means so much to me. Thanks.
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Very cool, can't wait to read more :D
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There were a few mistakes that I can point out if you want, nothing too large or jarring, just small typos and the like.
My absolute favourite line was this:
Ianto Jones sat in a dingy pub with a pint in his hand. He listened to a band that desperately needed a lead singer. All he could think was that this would have been so much less painful if Jack had never been there when he had woken up.
I thought this was going to lead to some sappy-happy au ending (which is fine by me XD), but I much more prefer that cannon was kept, and the line was just brilliant.
Thanks,
Tiggy
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I love the happy-sappy endings to, but I am soo not that person! I am pretty much doom and gloom and extremely cynical - which makes me a great drunk!!
I can't believe you have a favorite line! This is so exciting. *blushes*
I am going to go through and fix the typos and such that I have noticed soon, but if you picked some up please tell me. Iwould be forever grateful!
Thanks sooo much. This meant a lot to me (that sounded sort of weird - my bad).
w.w.w.
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