The End of a Road and the Beginning of a Crossroads, fic

Jul 04, 2009 13:59


The End of a Road and the Beginning of a Crossroads

Author: wit_worry_what
Rating: PG, I think
Word count: 1,407
Summary: Allison finally meets the man she has been looking for. He must make a choice; maybe he'll make a better one than she did... (I swear it's better than the summary)
Pairing: Jack/Ianto, OFC
Spoilers: End of Days
Song: Color ( Read more... )

ofc, fic, jack/ianto, torchwood, fic:torchwood

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strange_romance July 17 2009, 08:19:38 UTC
Lovely! Great concept, I really, really liked it :D Well written too, you know your way around words, which is always enjoyable to read n_n
Sorry it took me so long to get around to reading this btw, I haven't been on LJ in weeks, basically because I'm lazy and forgetful XD
Hope you'll post more stuff soon, it was fun to read :)

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wit_worry_what August 7 2009, 04:08:27 UTC
Thank you sooo much! Sorry it has taken me so long to reply. I am extremely lazy as well it turns out!!
I have already written another story and have just sort of created a series kind of thing. I am pretty excited. I will get one of those posted before the 19th (when I head back to school - ugh!). I PROMISE. I really will do it. To be honest I am more trying to convince myself rather than tell you! Sorry.
Thanks again for reviewing. This really means so much to me. Thanks.

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strange_romance August 15 2009, 03:11:14 UTC
That's fine :)
Very cool, can't wait to read more :D

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kuroneko_tyger August 6 2009, 01:29:27 UTC
Thanks for reccing this to me. I really enjoyed it. Normally I'm not a fan of OC characters, especially when the story is from their POV, but I really got that she had a purpose to the story, and that even though she was the main character, it was about Jack and Ianto.

There were a few mistakes that I can point out if you want, nothing too large or jarring, just small typos and the like.

My absolute favourite line was this:

Ianto Jones sat in a dingy pub with a pint in his hand. He listened to a band that desperately needed a lead singer. All he could think was that this would have been so much less painful if Jack had never been there when he had woken up.

I thought this was going to lead to some sappy-happy au ending (which is fine by me XD), but I much more prefer that cannon was kept, and the line was just brilliant.

Thanks,
Tiggy

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wit_worry_what August 7 2009, 04:12:32 UTC
No thank you!!! I am thrilled you enjoyed it.
I love the happy-sappy endings to, but I am soo not that person! I am pretty much doom and gloom and extremely cynical - which makes me a great drunk!!
I can't believe you have a favorite line! This is so exciting. *blushes*
I am going to go through and fix the typos and such that I have noticed soon, but if you picked some up please tell me. Iwould be forever grateful!
Thanks sooo much. This meant a lot to me (that sounded sort of weird - my bad).
w.w.w.

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