Comments | wit_worry_what: This Can Only End..., fic

wit_worry_what

This Can Only End..., fic

Dec 02, 2009 01:04

Arthur was tired; tired of waking up in the morning; tired of walking down the hallway; most of all though, he was tired of the seeming whispers and stares that followed him down that very same hallway.

It had been a month since Sophie had broken up with him, and he wasn’t sure if people even knew they had been going out, but they sure knew ( Read more... )

fic, fic:merlin, pg-13, merlin, this can only end

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sarcastic_fi December 2 2009, 13:41:07 UTC

looking forward to more of this i love school/uni AUs and i absolutely adore the interaction between Arthur and Merlin here!

wit_worry_what December 4 2009, 04:49:28 UTC

I agree! I love these types of fics, and hopefully I can do it justice. Thanks!
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astarael02 December 2 2009, 17:44:25 UTC

Hee! I like it :)

wit_worry_what December 4 2009, 04:49:37 UTC

Thanks!
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very nice baili_danseur December 2 2009, 18:18:18 UTC

great opening. can't wait to read the next chapter!

Re: very nice wit_worry_what December 4 2009, 04:56:17 UTC

It should be coming out tomorrow! Thanks for the comment!
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bookwormvicky December 2 2009, 18:31:04 UTC

YAY! Loved the mention of both Sophia and Mordred, I adore the school/uni AU fics, and love this! Merlin was gay, very gay *snorfle* Loved that, and the thing about Arthur checking out Lancelot's bum? Classic!

Awww! Merlin! Poor baby! Can't wait to see how you deal with Arthur's realisation, and the interaction between the two of them was amazing. Please write more soon!

Edited because I dislike my default userpic but forgot to put a better icon up.

bookwormvicky December 2 2009, 18:56:52 UTC

Also, urm, I'm tired but to me this: 'Surprisingly enough, Merlin found himself the touches and hugs they shared more than he thought a man such as him should, but Merlin and Arthur’s friendship had never been conventional.' does not make much sense, I get what you're trying to say - I think - but... Could you explain it to me as my brain is muddled from lack of sleep? Please?

Oh, and ADORE that Arthur gave Merlin his neckerchief!

wit_worry_what December 4 2009, 04:54:02 UTC

Thanks so much! You were right that passage didn't make much sense here is what it is supposed to say (I fixed it in the entry, too):
"Nonetheless Arthur walked through the parting sea of students to get to Merlin as was per usual and shouted a greeting. Merlin instantly turned around and embraced his friend as if he hadn’t seen him in months, not less than 12 hours. That was one of the many things about Merlin, he was extremely tactile. Surprisingly enough, Arthur found the touches and hugs they shared much more familiar than he thought a man such as him should, but Merlin and Arthur’s friendship had never been conventional."

Thanks again!
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bookwormvicky December 4 2009, 11:27:01 UTC

LOL, it's no problem. ;) That makes more sense, and is a really wonderful description too.

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lcacbc December 2 2009, 19:50:01 UTC

I <3 this story already! I love longing!Merlin and completely-fucking-clueless!Arthur XD Update soon...

wit_worry_what December 4 2009, 04:54:34 UTC

Hopefully I will update tomorrow! Thanks for the comment!
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