Comments | wit_worry_what: This Can Only End..., 3/?

wit_worry_what

This Can Only End..., 3/?

Dec 10, 2009 22:25

It was 2 o’clock in the morning, and Arthur just wanted to be asleep in his bed. HoweverHow, Merlin had invited him out with Morgana and Gwen and he couldn’t say ‘no’ to Merlin. If he did he’d get this little pouty face in reply, which, although adorable, stared into him like he’d just killed Merlin’s kitten (and he didn’t even have a kitten!). The ( Read more... )

fic, morgana/gwen, merlin/arthur, fic:merlin, pg-13, merlin, this can only end

Comments 11

sparkysluvchild December 11 2009, 04:58:31 UTC

Bugger! I just picked up about 5 grammatical errors that I'd missed. *headdesk* Sorry about that. I'll do better next time. :)

I know I said it earlier, but I'll say it again. I am loving this fic! I like the way you've written their dialogue. Rolls off the tongue, just like it would in real life. :)
Can't wait to see how this progresses. :D
Good work. :)

wit_worry_what December 15 2009, 19:00:39 UTC

I am so glad that it is translates. Don't worry about the mistakes! It's not a big deal. It looks better than the first draft! :D
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simallyher December 11 2009, 06:13:24 UTC

Oh I like how this is going, but Arthur is kinda really sweet with the whole wanting Merlin, but not wanting to be 'that guy', which is totally understandable! Good luck with your midterms and I hope there's another update as soon as time allows :D

wit_worry_what December 15 2009, 19:01:55 UTC

Yeah not being "that guy" when Merlin is so adorable is gonna be difficult.
Thanks for the comment!
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mmang0 December 11 2009, 08:59:22 UTC

yayyayayayyay!! I was so excited to see you update! So worth the wait!! Wow Arthur, took you long enough to figure it out! But I'm so glad he did.... hehe I guess Arthur's gonna get himself pretty tangled in Merlin's love life mess :o

Can't wait till the next update but you should focus on your exams for now! Good luck!

wit_worry_what December 15 2009, 19:04:27 UTC

Yeah...exams. Studying... that's funny! Anyway I just finished, but now I have a crazy week in front of me. Hopefully I will have a new chapter up soon...I just need to write it!
Glad that you are enjoying this!
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frakkin_addict December 11 2009, 15:49:44 UTC

SQUEEEEEEEEEE! OMG! So cute! I love the "trespass sweetly" line and Arthur's guesses followed by the realization. His reaction was perfect. Loved it!!! :D

wit_worry_what December 15 2009, 19:06:56 UTC

Thanks!!! I am glad you got that reference. I was trying not to make it sound cliche, but I feel like the moment Romeo and Juliet have is the moment Arthur and Merlin have...it just took them longer.
I LOOOVE your icon by the way!
More soon!
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bedofpearls December 11 2009, 20:43:02 UTC

I really quite like this, it's pretty awesome. And it indeed did help the procrastination. Good job. <3

wit_worry_what December 15 2009, 19:08:40 UTC

I glad it helped you with the procrastination; writing it certainly helped me!
Thanks so much!
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