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Dabbling in Drabbling..."Flushed Fate"

Feb 23, 2006 21:44

Title: Flushed Fate
Author: witchiepooh
Word Count: 100
Characters: Neville, Hermione, Draco
Rating: PG (one "bad" word out of 100)
A/N Inspired by and written for tamlane, after reading her interesting take on the drabble.

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chanteur_dombre February 24 2006, 12:07:07 UTC

*giggles* Snarky!Draco and is my favourite. And I have such a soft spot for Neville - he always gets the short end of the stick.

Very nicely done.

witchiepooh February 27 2006, 01:07:35 UTC

Ah yes, poor Neville :pppp

Thanks for the feedback, hon.

cupcaked February 24 2006, 21:26:32 UTC

Haha, excellent. I mean I was a bit...err, Neville, Hermione and Draco???

But that was such a good idea. Drabbles are so SO much harder than they look!

In other words, loved it. =)

(Damn straight the toad has a name, Malfoy! :p)

witchiepooh February 27 2006, 01:08:30 UTC

Are you suggesting I write a Neville/Hermione/Draco threesome??? You perv!!! :p

Thanks for the feedback, sweetie. :)

punchycat February 27 2006, 03:28:49 UTC

Haha, that was great. Poor Trevor.

witchiepooh February 27 2006, 19:23:19 UTC

Thanks!

freakish_freak March 1 2006, 13:57:23 UTC

LMAO,, I love Draco's first line. Toad. Hehe..

You know, reading the title, no one would think to take that literally =D

witchiepooh March 1 2006, 15:55:59 UTC

Hehe, thanks! And I'm glad that the title didn't tip you off. I thought perhaps it might give it away ;)

Thanks for the feedback, it is much appreciated! :)

eckerlilas March 1 2006, 15:21:11 UTC

I wandered over here from blasie100. Oh my, darlin'! This was wonderful! You had me from the pairing, because I was just too intrigued. Drabbles are quite hard to pull off, I am discovering. But you did it with gusto here!

You seriously had me going. I was thinking "Awwww...this is going to be an emo drabble by a graveside..." Boy, was I wrong.

Loved it! Poor Nev! Poor poor Trevor. Hermione is her usual self. And Draco, yeah, you hit the nail on the head, baby.

♥

eckerlilas March 1 2006, 15:22:28 UTC

damn, now if only I could type! *snort* blaise100

witchiepooh March 1 2006, 15:50:54 UTC

Thanks! I suppose there aren't too many Neville/Hermione/Draco stories out there :p...

But seriously, thanks. I'm glad you were fooled and I think it's because I fooled myself. As I mentioned above to Tam, I started this as a serious graveside drabble...and then it just turned on me. In a good way, I think!

Thanks so much for the feedback it is really appreciated. And, if you don't mind, I enjoy your work too so I'm going to add you to my f-list.

eckerlilas March 1 2006, 15:54:50 UTC

Thanks so much for the feedback it is really appreciated. And, if you don't mind, I enjoy your work too so I'm going to add you to my f-list.

Of course! I'm a feedback hOr! I like to give and receive *grin*

I enjoy your work as well!
And please do add me to your flist. I'll be adding you back right away!

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