The Pensieve: Part Two of ????

[witchiepooh]

Title: The Pensieve: Part Two
Author: Thea Witchiepooh
Pairing/Characters: Eventually Draco/Hermione, Ron, Kingsley Shacklebolt
Rating: PG-13 for now
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter or any of these characters.
Summary: Hermione prepares to enter the memories of Draco Malfoy. You can read Part One here.
Warnings: HBP spoilers
A/N: Thanks to those of you

Comments

[izzzy88]

Oof, just fabulous, riveting stuff. Every sentence begs for the next until I hit the TBC and my brain sort of crashes over itself trying to reconcile that there is no more yet. I love getting lost in a story like that, so thank you for the moment of complete, entertaining escape! Your detail is fascinating and seamless to the world, which only helps in the submersion - to keep things short, I love your imagination!

[witchiepooh]

Your detail is fascinating and seamless to the world, which only helps in the submersion - to keep things short, I love your imagination!

Thanks! This is really my first attempt at writing a fanfic that is closely tied to canon--so it's much harder for me. Your words make me feel like I'm succeeding so far, and it means a lot. :)

[yesterday4]

Oh ho ho, you did not end it there! I might have to sit you down at the computer at metaphorical wand point until you write more!

I'm still really enjoying this. I like the idea of someone being a Memoria and also how doing so could show a more complex side to the Death Eaters. This is very well written- I couldn't tell at all that it hadn't been beta read- and I love your attention to detail. More please!

[witchiepooh]

Thanks for the feedback, even though you've threatened me at wand point! :P

I like the idea of someone being a Memoria and also how doing so could show a more complex side to the Death Eaters.

It just seemed like the perfect fit for Hermione (not to mention a plot device where *she* has to be the one to use the Pensieve). But yes, I do want to show shades of grey when it comes to the Death Eaters. Though I think Hermione needs to be very careful.

This is very well written- I couldn't tell at all that it hadn't been beta read- and I love your attention to detail. More please!

Thanks again. I'm glad you read this newer version versus my late night original posting...ugh, I need to stop myself from posting when I'm tired! I didn't change it drastically, but I do think it needed some work.

Stay tuned for more...

[speaknoenglish]

whoa! i love your story!! more more! ^^

[witchiepooh]

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback :)

[witchiepooh]

Awww, thanks. I have the next chapter in my head, just haven't had a chance to write it yet! Thanks for your suggestion, though I think "Memoria" works :)

[angelpiphi]

I just found this story on kissherdraco's rec list. It really is fantastic!!! Please, please update soon!!

[angelpiphi]

Thanks! I promise I will be continuing the story, I just haven't had a chance to work on it in the last few weeks... hopefully I can file a new chapter before the end of the month! (Life is getting in the way of my fanfic time--mostly in good ways!)

Anyway, thanks again. I really appreciate the feedback. :)

[witchiepooh]

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