When You Think of Me

May 02, 2009 13:51


Title: When You Think of Me
Author: witchlesbian

Pairing: Olivia/Natalia
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Nothing Owned, Nothing Gained.
Spoiler: No Spoilers, purely fictitious on my part.
Note from Author: This is my very first fanfic ever…I hope you enjoy it!

Natalia lay in bed, as her phone rang.  It was Olivia calling to say goodnight.

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calliopes_muse May 3 2009, 03:15:39 UTC
Wow, that was...HAWT!!! Damn, I love these phone sex stories we're getting now. Nice first fic. Hope you keep writing.

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witchlesbian May 3 2009, 03:37:07 UTC
Now that I've proven to myself that I can, I think I will keep writing! That is if I can pull myself away from youtube and Otalia vids long enough! I'm HUGELY addicted! Thanks for the wonderful complement! I'm honored...I love your work!

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otalia4life May 21 2009, 01:13:11 UTC
that was..... woah!!

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witchlesbian May 21 2009, 02:49:23 UTC
I hope that means you liked it! LOL

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witchlesbian May 26 2009, 00:15:21 UTC
LOL...of course they are going about everything backwards...the kids...community first...move in...then maybe they will kiss.

That never happens...it's supposed to be kiss...make love...Uhaul!!! LOL!!!

You know there are plenty of youtube postings showing just how HAWT these women are separately...when they finally get together I expect an earthquake due to everyone hitting the floor from passing out!!! LOL!!!

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witchlesbian May 26 2009, 00:16:55 UTC
I'm glad you LOVED it though!!!

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OMG ann_leejacobs June 8 2009, 02:33:57 UTC
NEED COLD SHOWER! NEED...No more Dimples today or else I'll start doing the same as Natalia...NEED SHOWER...NO MORE DIMPLES!
Jesus where is the ice that was ...THUD!
Do you think CC is reading this?? O_o

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Re: OMG witchlesbian June 8 2009, 05:20:22 UTC
You just made my night! Thank you so much for your response...I'm so glad you liked it! I don't think CC has read it, but if she ever did read it, I would be honored! I'm honored that you read it...thanks for your wonderful feedback! :-)~

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julieluvsotalia June 8 2009, 23:21:44 UTC
Holy smokes. For a first fan fic, it's way better than mine. But I'm shy about writing the sex part too. Okay, I'm just shy in general. But wow *thud*

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witchlesbian June 8 2009, 23:57:09 UTC
I never thought I could write fanfic, let alone NC-17 fanfic...however I had the "Queen of Smut" (hot_4_hahn) coaxing me to at least try...she thought I'd be good at it given my writing style. She shared with me how she gets into the zone...imagining she's right there...and then writes such beautifully detailed NC-17 fic! If you haven't read her work yet I'd highly recommend it, however she writes Callica/Erica_Hahn fanfic...not Otalia fanfic.

I really appreciate your wonderful feedback! I'm so very glad you enjoyed my fanfic! I really love thud's...they tell me Mission Accomplished!!! :-)~

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julieluvsotalia June 9 2009, 23:31:34 UTC
I'm guessing those are the two from "Gray's Anatomy". I haven't watched that show since season one. My world seems to revolve around Otalia all the time, at the moment.:) Imaging she's right there? *thud*. I can't seem to write anything more than PG rated stuff.

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