HMD

[withdemonblood]

I'm going to be honest and say that this is the first time I've done an 'How's my Driving' post for a character, let alone Sam. But don't let that stop you. Tell me what you think? Constructive criticism is an important step in improvement. I promise I don't bite. So shoot me a pm or a message and I'll get back to you as soon as I can.

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[gained_a_level]

Hi Jezi!

I wanted to hit you up, since the TDS HMD post went up recently and there were a few things I wanted to go over with you about my impressions of your Sam thus far:

Your way of writing prose has a certain artistic disorganization which, while neat to read, doesn't really fit the voice of Sam. It's nifty, but the stream-of-consciousness style is better suited to a character not as introspective and organized as Sam is.

Activity is probably premature at this point to provide concrit on, but... I think it's worth mentioning now. We have a really active cast and it's been a few days since Dean posted his intro. While you're meeting the requirements for the game's activity, it would be nice to see more of Sam. I know you've only been here a month, but during such a high energy, crucial part of the game and considering he's a main character in a cast who have important CR with him, it kind of sucks to be all "Where's Sam?!"

/h-hugs,
GJ

[withdemonblood]

I had a question for you when I was leaving work. I think it was about the artistic organization, but I'm not really sure. When I try to remember what I was thinking it feels like a headache is behind held behind floodgates. o^ o

Buuut! I'll try to remember when I see you on messenger.
&& I appreciate your input. /hugs.~<3