in love with love and lousy poetry

Nov 17, 2004 18:29

And I'm leaning on this broken fence Between past and present tense
And I'm losing all those stupid games That I swore I'd never play
But it almost feels okay

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dramaminedoses November 17 2004, 15:38:46 UTC
Between past and present tense would be present participle tense. These are words ending with -ing. Examples would be "leaning" and "losing."

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impaleyourself November 17 2004, 17:26:04 UTC
reminds me of a sandwich i once had, and my my my it was just heaven in my hands not to heavy never soggy warm and fresh just how i like her.

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rely a bit too heavily on alcohol and irony anonymous November 17 2004, 18:41:54 UTC
and i'm losing, but i'll try
with the last ways left to remember, sing
my imperfect offering

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Re: rely a bit too heavily on alcohol and irony withdrawl November 18 2004, 12:34:13 UTC
who is this?

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explained November 18 2004, 04:02:51 UTC
weakerthans?

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I saw you dude_thatsharsh November 18 2004, 13:02:49 UTC

kid that loves to read your entrys

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