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[witheredtears]

Last Halloween

The leaves seemed to paint the sky,
With orange, yellow, and red,
As the lady as pale as the moon,
Mumbled, and crawled out of bed

It was silent at first,
Not a shadow to be seen,
On this twisted, and dark,
Late halloween

The door bell had rang,
But not a kid in sight,
Only a small letter left on the doorstep,
Readable in candle light

She

Comments

[cammiesrad]

I love it. ♥
It made me shiver. o_o

I especially love the
'Who constantly bitched'
part. xD

Wonderful, as always, love.

[punchycat]

That gave me chills.. I love it.

[da_chiefxx]

That was a little freaky...which means I loved it.

[squirrelzr4kidz]

I love it!

Thanks for your advice! ♥

[kels3yness]

Wow that was awsome o_o.

My frend ashley got creeped out rofl.

Anyways youre going to be a famous poet I can tell.

=o

[st4rliightz]

Wow that was awesome. I'll buy your book when you get one, which I know you will. I love poetry, even though I cannot write it. xD Your awesome Star!

[paperedhearts]

Oahh yeah its as sexy as my shirt &
this fucking sexy boy playing
basket ball outside now.