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withhook

A.C. Milan-centric mini-series; part three of ten,

Feb 10, 2008 16:06

Summary: Gourcuff wrestles with his insecurities, leaving more victims than himself. Ibrahimovic struggles with the demons of his lifestyle and Pirlo and Maldini face the reality of life without their long-standing but volatile relationship.

Part three in a ten part mini-series

Rating: All of them
Pairings/Characters: Kaká, Gourcuff, Pirlo, Maldini ( Read more... )

zlatan ibrahimovic, alexandre pato, alberto gilardino, andrea pirlo, paolo maldini, a.c. milan, alessandro nesta, kaka, fic, yoann gourcuff, 10

Comments 10

ilo February 10 2008, 17:19:55 UTC

I was trying to remember what this reminded me of and then I remembered, it has a delicious Dangerous Liaisons feel to it. I really like the world building that you are doing in this, and the reference to Pato being the boy in the first story is just SO WRONG, and yet incredibly pleasing.

withhook February 12 2008, 20:38:12 UTC

Thank you. your comment is amazing - and far too kind :)

zeldas February 12 2008, 23:13:47 UTC

Magnificent. I just read second chapter and now this. And I loved it. As usual, the descriptions are amazing, the characters are so well written. I'm sure I've said this before in one of your other fics, but- I love your Maldini. He's so different from the other Maldinis around, and that what makes me like him, I think.

(Eeee. Spider!)

withhook April 18 2008, 00:24:31 UTC

Thank you. I always try to get the characterisation right but I'm never really sure if it makes the cut - comments like yours are very motivating.

zeldas April 18 2008, 00:34:06 UTC

Hey, long time no see! I'm glad you're okay- I started to think you left LJ or something :)

bluishblack February 16 2008, 16:40:22 UTC

i accidentally clicked on this article and when i read through it, i just can't stop "wow - wow" in front of my desktop (as dorky as you can imagined...) i really like the interaction between Nesta and Ibra, that was very funny to read (wow with LOL in the midnight...), and it just fits their relationships.

so i read the whole fic, from the very beginning.
and i just LOVE the last part of part 2, where ibra telling his feelings. that's just so brilliant!

Longing for the next update! :)

withhook April 18 2008, 00:27:05 UTC

Wow - thank you so much for the comment. Hopefully I'll be able to work together the next part one day soon -

robert_ross_cg March 30 2008, 19:57:53 UTC

I hope you okey. Miss your writing also. Where are you and how are you? :)

withhook April 18 2008, 00:22:38 UTC

Hey - sorry I've been very busy with my new job/career; this is the first time I've even checked my lj mail in a long time...thanks for the concern, I'm very well and I hope you are also.

calzamante April 16 2008, 19:36:34 UTC

Hi, I just wanted to let you know that I am about to rec the footerslashsanta fic you wrote for me at footie_pimp. Is it posted anywhere else that I can link to? Only, linking to the post there means you won't get notification of any comments left. I wanted to give you the opportunity to either give me an alternative url to use as a link, or at the very least start tracking comments to the entry!
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