Autumn's 10 Word Challenge

Feb 24, 2008 10:02


Smooth waves of joy
wash over my soul.
Why should I deny 
what you offer?

Rising and falling
two heart beats together
latch us, bond us
hold me tighter.

Will you regret loving me
when you go back home?
Will you tell me our kisses
were just a casual exchange?

There is a bridge 
between us, linking
two souls. Your gentle
dulcet humming in my ears.

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autumnsea February 25 2008, 10:29:06 UTC
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ailaya_believes February 25 2008, 14:58:43 UTC
Thank you so much for the feedback Suzy! It's great to hear something that might help my writing style.
*hugs back*
AJ

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autumnsea March 5 2008, 00:09:02 UTC
AJ my sweet, Jen has posted her latest story instalment in your Pass Game Challenge and has tagged you. Just so you know. :)

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