Autumn's 10 word

[rocketpockets]

Fallen

fall for your eyes
refuse to love me
i like it that way
sugar sweet smell on your neck
it triggers how things went
how they are supposed to be
i do not regret kissing him
with his olive hands slipping up my dress
latching onto the perfect kiss
the perfect drug
as i sing the dulcet sad song
the moon has a crescent loneliness
and nothing else matters
as you

Comments

[autumnsea]

There are some great lines in this, Nikki.

Like:

"i do not regret kissing him
with his olive hands slipping up my dress
latching onto the perfect kiss"

"the moon has a crescent loneliness"

"like the thimble to your heart
sewn in increments
i am splattered against your kiss."

[rocketpockets]

thank you.

have not been writing, and i really need to pick up that pen again. i miss it.

[lostincandyrain]

I really liked this, particularly the line "sewn in increments"

It was good to read something of yours again!

[rocketpockets]

really???

thank you.

i feel lost, i have not written anything good, to my knowledge in months!!!

so thanks@!

[ailaya_believes]

I really like this, you may not have writen in a while, but this is really good.
It's so sensitive. If that's the right word.
Great job.
AJ