Autumn's 10 word

[rocketpockets]

Chamber to Caliber

i suckle the lust out of you
done his bidding
and i walk away so joyful
plural
ready steady complete
my heart pumping into your heart
the balloon floats to the tip of your voice
skimming for an audience
i speak the truth in wanting you now
hide behind your eyes
and the truth knows nothing about lies

chamber

to caliber

to yearn
for a hand on my

Comments

[autumnsea]

I really like the image here:

"paper trail doctrine
loosely put on fire
watch it burn
burned to your lips
crisped
dark .."

Great description, Nikki.

[rocketpockets]

thank you Suzy.

[lostincandyrain]

My favorite stanza was the same as Suzy's, but I also wanted to mention that I really like the line, "the balloon floats to the tip of your voice"

it was so interesting! I loved it.

[rocketpockets]

yeah, it's kinda of funny. i hate balloons.
balloons are my fear....really.

but thanks for reading

[lostincandyrain]

Well the balloon image in the poem was kind of scary, so it works! That is fairly odd though, I must say. ;)