Autumn's Picture Challenge 2

[lostincandyrain]

Comments

[miriyasterling]

That's a nice short piece. I also love the name Moira.

[lostincandyrain]

Thanks!

[autumnsea]

There is such an endearing quality to this. The last bit where Alice runs after Moira and Moira smiles down and takes her sister's hand is wonderful and touched me.

And that last line "You might not know it yet, but you have your mother's smile" is a perfect ending to this short story. A good way of reintroducing and reinforcing their mother.

I like that you included three characters and the story was being told through Aunt Becca.

:)

[lostincandyrain]

Thanks! This picture just has such a strong sense of perspective that I had to write it as the person who sees it, exactly as it is.

It was a fun picture to write about.