May Angels Lead You In, C/C, PG

Jan 04, 2005 02:19

Title: May Angels Lead You In, Part 1
Author: withinveritas
Rating: PG
Characters: Charlie/Claire, Jack/Kate, Hurley
Summary: They survived the island, drugs and several births but something more sinister has been taking hold.
Note: I wrote this for the Tearjerker challenge. It’s taken me forever to tear it out of my muse. Yes, I realize it's been over two ( Read more... )

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honerbright January 4 2005, 09:37:29 UTC
*sniffle* Really great xD
i gotta stop reading the tearjerkers (granted, even the happy ones make me sniffley lmfao)

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withinveritas January 4 2005, 17:23:35 UTC
No, you have to keep reading them! There's at least two more parts! (Quite possibly three but I won't say that officially)

Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting. Hope you like the next part as well!

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honerbright January 4 2005, 22:25:34 UTC
theres more than one part? w00t! cant wait xD

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kristin80 January 4 2005, 16:54:06 UTC
Awww...I should have stopped as soon as I saw the part about it being a TEARJERKER..but it was so good...*sob*

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withinveritas January 4 2005, 17:24:33 UTC
Uh-huh. Okay. There's going to be a part two. Probably Thursday or Friday since I have to space them out but who knows. Maybe I'll get impatient?

And it gets worse. I was crying when I was writing it. This is just the beginning.

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kristin80 January 4 2005, 17:32:48 UTC
It gets worse? How could it get worse?? *waaahhhh*

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withinveritas January 4 2005, 18:45:04 UTC
Because I am evil, that's why? lol

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literarylemming January 4 2005, 21:23:56 UTC
AHHHHHHHHH! Oh God, you can't end it there! I need to have the rest! Every horrible, tragic, sordid detail! Holy shit, this is good. I swear when I REALLY mean it, and I could let loose a string of curses over this one. It's THAT f-ing good. Gyah, I won't beg for part 2, because I know how frustrating that can be, but I will tell you I'm eager for more!

Thank you SO MUCH for not forgetting my Tearjerker Challenge! This is why I didn't give it an end date -- precisely for gorgeous stuff like this! :-D

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withinveritas January 5 2005, 09:17:22 UTC
No, thank YOU for not giving the Tearjerker Challenge a deadline! You have no idea how happy I am that you did that - or how happy you made my muse. -grins-

And swear away, really. Because right now, it'll just be the warm up, trust me. May as well practice all of your words now! Lol :p

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ckdutchess January 5 2005, 01:24:52 UTC
Oh, my. That was great and hard and definitely a tearjearker. My mouth dropped when I read the word "cancer" and I can't wait to read the rest once you get it written.

I can so picture that last scene, especially. It broke my heart. :(

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withinveritas January 5 2005, 09:19:41 UTC
Awww I love that scene as well. It was one of the first scenes I wrote for this fic (I write out of order, hence the long time coming) and all I could think was deathly quiet. No pun intended.

Thank you SO MUCH for reading and responding. I hope you like the next part as well as this one. :)

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ckdutchess January 5 2005, 15:07:20 UTC
I'm sure I will... :)

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schmooie730 January 5 2005, 04:08:37 UTC
WOW! That was really sad! I can't wait to read the next part though!

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withinveritas January 5 2005, 09:21:15 UTC
Thank you! :D

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