[PART 05] Dance for the Brokenhearted

Sep 24, 2008 00:29

Title: Dance for the Brokenhearted. (PT 05)
Author: kyuppuccino
Pairing: Zhou Mi / Kyuhyun
Extra: R-rated (for cussing and hints of sex) / AU ( Read more... )

rating: r, pairing(+): zhoumi/kyuhyun

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aisagreem September 25 2008, 01:48:05 UTC
I wish you were here.

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jenlovesmi September 25 2008, 06:10:10 UTC
Snippet 5

It first starts with the end of snippet 4. Kyuhyun tells Zhou Mi to stop worrying and hides what he doesn't want to remember. Then it goes into a flashback to the time when he got the scars. He remembers Zhou Mi while he is in the ambulance, going to the hospital. He didn't want to say anything. Then his thoughts get interrupted when Zhou Mi says that he misses the younger boy. He felt it and it made him not think of anything else. I can feel the love so very much, Zhou Mi clings to him, as if Kyuhyun will go and leave again. Kyuhyun can't do anything besides remain where he was. A few seconds later, he knew he had to get the older boy away from him. It hurt so much. He told Zhou Mi to let him go. To let him go although what he wanted was the opposite. Zhou Mi repeats what he said earlier. That he can't live without him, that the pain is too much for him to bear. Kyuhyun gives up and asks him why. Zhou Mi says the small things, the moments of love, the memories the two shared together. Zhou Mi can't stand it anymore, he ( ... )

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mintoro September 25 2008, 19:54:33 UTC
Though I said I can't really take this kind of story
but unni you wrote it nicely
keep up and im looking forward =D

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