[PART 06] Dance for the Brokenhearted

[withkyulatte]

Title: Dance for the Brokenhearted. (PT 06)
Author: kyuppuccino
Pairing: Zhou Mi / Kyuhyun
Extra: NC-17-rated (barely graphic sex) / AU

I wanted to be saved, gege.Once again, Zhou Mi was staring at the scar disfiguring Kyuhyun's flesh, the same he had seen just moments before, and that he seemed to be unable to erase from his memory. It wasn't his fault,

Comments

[jenlovesmi]

I'm not going to make a long comment this time like usual, but that last part, very eerily too much similar what happened to me. Very well done. It actually made me remember the helplessness I felt at that time. That's a very good thing, if your writing makes me remember of that time. Good chapter.

[aisagreem]

That was oddly sweet despite the apparent sadness of it all. I can relate to Kyuhyun very well although I usually hyperventilate while kissing people. >_> Or when I'm thinking of unpleasant things, never while I'm actually doing them.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JaWAPZAGbEw <- this song reminds me of this particular snippet; of the positive, playful memories as well as the heartbreaking moments.

I liked this snippet very much. Thank you for writing it. <3

[d_me_myself_i]

I decided to read everything that you've written first then write a comment.
Well, well, I love your snippets (or whatever their official name is).
I am really fussy with grammar and stuff that I usually can't stand reading something, however good the content may be, which is written with crap language. Even if I do, I do with lots of pain.
Your work just truly amazes me. I didn't realise that I already finished 6 parts in probably less than 20 minutes.
I get a strong impression that Zhou Mi is the masculine one and Kyuhyun is the slightly feminine one (duh!) and their characters are written well, whether or not Kyuhyun & Zhou Mi are really like that. But hey, you need some imagination to write and read a fic, don't you.
All in all, I had a great read, really great.
I'll be waiting for the upcoming parts. Thanks for writing.

[starflower135]

Oh, I hope you won't stop with this >< These drabbles/chapters are so heartbreaking to read, but they seem to hint at a chance of forgiveness, of Kyu possibly accepting Mi again. It would be great to see that in writing. Keep up with wonderful work.

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