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Ok, I really like this one, BUT it feels a little bit shaky as if at any moment it might collapse to the ground. There is a girter or a support beam missing and and it's structure is dangerously close to falling apart. I feel as if it only needs one or two more lines to tie the entire thing together but I have no idea what they are right now. I am
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bewildered with the broken tongue
of wakened angels in our sleep -
then, lost the music that was sung
and lost the light time cannot keep!
there is a moment when we lie
bewildered, wakened out of sleep,
when light and sound and all reply:
that moment time must tame and keep.
that moment, like a flight of birds
flung from the branches where they sleep,
the poet with a beat of words
flings into time for time to keep.
archibald macleish
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