chatfic: a russian story of love and betrayal

[withoutmaps]

Oh, god. Every time disarm_d and I get on AIM, we come up with bits and pieces of fic. Last night was more of the same and she let me spam her about this for hours. Hours, seriously. It started something like this:

disarm_d (7:06:50 PM): panic as russian terrorists!
disarm_d (7:06:53 PM): how would that go?
audreysrev (7:06:58 PM): I have no idea!
audreysrev (7:07:05 PM): they would be an

Comments

[insunshine]

I LOVE, DUDE.

I LOVE, SO, SO HARDCORE.

I would quote at you [and believe me, I was talking to Laura while reading this, and I spammed her], but I feel icky and I'm tired, but.

But!

This was excellent, as usual, and I am memories-ing it, because hello. It's you and it's Brendon/Spencer.

[withoutmaps]

YAY! \o/ I'm so glad you like it!!

This thing, just. I don't even know. *hands* I love it and I'm just glad someone else does too!

Aww, you are so sweet!

[untappedbeauty]

Ooooh, this is awesomely fascinating and new, and you are made of win!

But.

There's a place right near the end where it looks like something's missing:

He doesn't think Brendon will go. He knows Brendon wantsfeel it when Tom comes, partly because Jon flails a bit and partly because he's still pressed as close as possible to Tom.

Is there something missing? Because if so... *makes gimme hands*

[withoutmaps]

OH GOD. *facepalm* Seriously not my day.

But. It's fixed! (I messed up the html, god.)

And you missed one of the best parts!

[untappedbeauty]

NGH. You're totally right it's one of the best parts! Ryan! FUCKING JON! I will never not approve of that. (Why doesn't Jon get fucked more in fic? WHY?)

[withoutmaps]

It is! This is totally my new favorite thing. (I DON'T KNOW. It certainly needs to happen more often. I mean, really. Get on that, fandom.)

[technolustt]

You are amazing.
I mean, smugglers! assassins! This is just something that made my brain melt. Oh, the originality!
and you succeeded in making me interested in history while I read this.
And omfg, Ryan fucking Jon may be the best thing since sliced bread because ohmyjesusgod it was so hot. Why don't people write that more often? Jon should definitely be on the receiving end more often.
And the Spencer buying Ryan cake! And the Spencer/Brendon! And and the Tom!
I just loved the whole thing. ♥

[withoutmaps]

Thank you! I can't believe how well it actually worked, I mean. Terrorists! and yay history!

I so want more bottom!Jon. Bottom!Jon is made of awesome, seriously. Especially when it's Ryan giving. SO HOT.

I'm so glad you liked! <3

[blushandrecover]

this is great. it's drama but somehow lighter, obviously dealing with heavy history issues; just really, really well-handled.

[withoutmaps]

Thank you! I'm so glad that the issues seem really well-handled. I wanted to pay enough attention to what really happened as still tell a story. So yay! :)

[anonymous]

it's so so distant, i think it could be amazing if it was written in more detail and given more of an atmosphere but as chatfic, it's really awesome. but it strikes me more as an outline for something epic than a real story.

i'm sorry about going anon but i feel like people take criticism better from anons than a un.

[withoutmaps]

Hey, so. I don't even know if you're going to check this again, but I just wanted to say that you're very right. It is just an outline, a sort of what would happen. I've thought about doing individual scenes, going a little more in-depth on certain parts, but I just haven't had the chance.

Basically, I just wanted to say that I appreciate your feedback. :)