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Cameron/Sarah: Time Loop 12

Sep 03, 2009 11:22

Title: Time Loop 12
Author: wkgreen
Fandom: Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles
Pairing: Cameron/Sarah
Rating: PG
Summary: Sarah comes face to face with Cameron’s importance to her.

Disclaimer: I don’t own them; they belong to FOX television and Warner Brothers.

Notes: I have only read fanfiction about these two, so I apologize in advance if I ( Read more... )

sarah connor chronicles, tscc

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wkgreen September 3 2009, 18:28:22 UTC

My idea is too build their relationship thru many Time Loop stories. Like putting together a puzzle. :) Hopefully I pull it off well.

melanacious September 3 2009, 18:33:09 UTC

I have been following this series and enjoying it actually that Camera is so devoted to Sarah that she would endure a time loop over and over to experience life with her again...is a wonderful concept

wkgreen September 3 2009, 18:40:11 UTC

Thank you very much. :) I am glad you are enjoying it. The idea hit me between the eyes one night and I have had to write it.

4kennedy September 3 2009, 21:49:18 UTC

Another great addition to your time loop series! It's good thing Cameron is so persistant otherwise it would be a bit annoying to start all over again with Sarah, because it's not a piece of cake to win that woman's heart.
You worked the video great into this story. Big aawww moment when Sarah leaves the "Don't leave me!" message on Cameron's voice mail.

wkgreen September 4 2009, 02:51:16 UTC

Thanks 4kennedy. And yes, Cameron has to be... focused, Sarah has all kinds of bristles.

tanama30 September 4 2009, 01:45:20 UTC

i like this loop will you be adding more to this story? i hope so i love the whoe loop series

wkgreen September 4 2009, 02:53:44 UTC

Not sure, tanama30, this is the second request for this loop to be expanded. My original plan is to fill out their relationship thru different time loops. But plans are made to be tossed. :)
And Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it.

demoka September 4 2009, 03:17:17 UTC

XP.... a very strange one this one, but enjoyable none the less.

oh yeah, minor peeve here though,
Sarah is barely halfway thru hers, constant expectant stares from Cameron only thing keeping her eating.
You have GOT to change "thru" to "through".

This one ended a bit abruptly, but it was fun. And aw to Sarah freaking out but I am a little concerned that Cam got trapped... Sarah calling Cam Robot was strange too, I don't think she's ever called called her Robot like that. but eh, it was bound to occur, right?

wkgreen September 4 2009, 05:31:40 UTC

Windows hates me using thru instead of through too, have no idea where I picked up that habit.

Ahh.. good to know, thought I had seen Sarah calling Cameron Robot somewhere. Thanks for the feedback on that. And Sarah was extremely unnerved when she did call Cameron robot, trying to drive Cam away.

Yeah, the ending was a bit abrupt, struggled with it and it was supposed to be ALOT of rubble and in the time it took Sarah to find her she went from completely buried to only half buried. If Sarah had been a little slower, Cam would have gotten herself free. :)