Cameron/Sarah: Time Loop 59

[wkgreen]

Title: Time Loop 59
Author: wkgreen
Fandom: Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles
Pairing: Cameron/Sarah
Rating: PG-13, warning for violence
Summary: Sarah discovers that Cameron is hiding stuff from her.

Disclaimer: I don’t own them; they belong to FOX television and Warner Brothers.
Notes: I have only read fanfiction about these two, so I

Comments

[wkgreen]

Thank you for reading. Glad you are enjoying it.

[demoka]

Okay, aside from all the typos riddling the fic, over all it was a great action piece! (although at times there was too much blow by blow going on, especially if all the fighting happened in 11 seconds)

(I'm being very critical tonight cause I had writing class today, keep that in mind)

Although, I really must say, I doubt John has or would ever call Sarah anything but Mom. Having him call her Sarah is weird. And I don't think he would ever leave her in this sort of situation, at least not voluntarily. (so yes, eventually you'll watch TSCC?)

I really loved Cam hovering over Sarah going down the stairs, that was awesome sweet!

[wkgreen]

Hmmm.. you are right, John wouldn't call her Sarah. That was an easy change, so made it.

Eep...typos, thought I caught them all.

Critical is good, you have given my lots of good advice and insights demoka. :)

As to watching TSCC, not sure. I haven't watched any TV shows regularly for a couple of years now.

Glad you are still enjoying the story. :)

[freakykaethe]

Awesome time loop!!
I especially loved the fight scene, and the fact that Cameron learned fighting like that from Sarah :D

[wkgreen]

Thanks, the fight scene was fun to write out. :)

[olli01a]

John's reaction to Cameron's revelation is great. The fighting scene is well done.

[wkgreen]

Thanks :)

typo

[sscout]

spins around the its second punch <-- -the
around 7th second
:)

Re: typo

[wkgreen]

Thanks :)