Time Loop: 1000 yrs after JD (Judgement Day)

[wkgreen]

Title: Time Loop: 1000 yrs after JD (Judgement Day)
Author: wkgreen
Fandom: Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles
Pairing: Cameron/Sarah
Rating: PG-13
Summary: A tale from The Chronicles of Sarah Connor
Disclaimer: I don’t own them; they belong to FOX television and Warner Brothers.

Notes: I have mainly read fanfiction about these two and I have now

Comments

[druidesswolf]

This was beautiful. Looking back on history always casts it in a unique perspective, especially when viewed thru the eyes of a child, for they still see the magic that adults forget as they age. A truely great loop. Hope to see more!!!

[wkgreen]

Thanks. And more is on the way. :)

[revolos55]

Awwww *sniff*

[wkgreen]

(hands over a kleenex) Glad you liked it.

[demoka]

aw, that's sweet and a good representation. Manifesting the souls was a good idea!

Might I suggest that you make it more clear when we are transitioning from the class room scenes to the Sarah/Cameron scene?

WHY are the children named so? XP Who's kids are they? Who is the teacher....?

[wkgreen]

aw, that's sweet and a good representation. Manifesting the souls was a good idea!

Thanks! :)

Might I suggest that you make it more clear when we are transitioning from the class room scenes to the Sarah/Cameron scene?

D'oh! (facepalm) The story was supposed to be italicized, but I forgot to make sure the formatting carried over. I will see if I can fix that.

WHY are the children named so? XP Who's kids are they? Who is the teacher....?

My original idea was to have the class, kids and teacher, to be faceless representations of all classrooms. But then some kids started developing personalities and it felt wrong for the teacher to not use their names when addressing them, so I had to pick some names. Oh and I just thought of a great name for the teacher! Ms Weaver. :) Going to sneak that in. And why are they named after John, Sarah, Cameron, Charley? To make you wonder if there is some relationship or are they just named after famous people.

[wkgreen]

Thanks :)

[olli01a]

Wow. Beautiful and sad at the same time.

[wkgreen]

Thanks :)