Cameron/Sarah: Time Loop 47

[wkgreen]

Title: Time Loop 47

Comments

[4kennedy]

wow, this one was full of awesome fighting action and I really liked how they fought together as a team and how Cameron protected Sarah.
Bittersweet ending, because my feeling tells me that Sarah is not going to make it. But there's light at the end of the tunnel as Cameron will travel back in time so that they can be together.
Once again, well done!

[wkgreen]

Thanks, I like writing fighting scenes. :)

And yes, the odds are against Sarah. But the odds have always been against her.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

[4kennedy]

And yes, the odds are against Sarah. But the odds have always been against her.
that's true, she's definitely one to beat the odds.

[wkgreen]

That is one of the things that I thinks makes her a great fighter, that she can defy the odds.

Future John will learn how to change the odds, which is one of the things that will make him the leader he becomes.

[wkgreen]

Yup, they are very insync with each other. :)

Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[freakykaethe]

Awesome, this is a wonderful time loop
You're writing is perfect and I could feel every moment in this fic, loved it :)

[wkgreen]

Thanks! I enjoy writing action scenes. I am glad what I am visualizing is coming out well. :)

[tac04]

Loved the story as always! Ooooo... Severe injury to the stomach? Are we reading a scenario similar to how Sarah died in the very first Time Loop?

[wkgreen]

Glad you liked it tac04.

Hmmm... maybeeee. :)

:P

[sscout]

that got pass the crashing gunship, <-- past
and she can’t help but to remember all the times <-- -to

\o/

Re: :P

[wkgreen]

Hehe, nice choice of icon! :) Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting and catching those errors. :)