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wkgreen February 27 2010, 20:32:16 UTC
Thanks el groovatore, the humourous moments wrote themselves once I got them started.

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gleekitten February 27 2010, 01:14:10 UTC
Warm fuzzies XD

Cutest wedding story evar.♥♥♥

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wkgreen February 27 2010, 20:34:04 UTC
Thanks gleekitten :)

I asked myself how they would become out and official couple to everyone and this is what popped into my mind, an accidental proposal/acknowledgment. :)

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tanama30 February 27 2010, 05:13:05 UTC
what a great update i love cameron's girl side it was too adorable. loved it great job

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wkgreen February 27 2010, 20:34:41 UTC
Thanks alot tanama30, Cameron is doing her job in keeping Sarah smiling. :)

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druidesswolf February 27 2010, 08:39:09 UTC
Loved it! Cutest wedding ever! A nice change of pace from the previous Loops...I missed this series. Keep em comin!

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wkgreen February 27 2010, 20:36:35 UTC
Thanks druidesswolf, I have more in mind. But work is interfering with being able to sit down and write. I hope to have things back to normal by the end of March. :) But I do have another Time Loop with my beta'er. ;)

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revolos55 February 27 2010, 10:45:09 UTC
“Keep your damn hands off of my wife!” - Aww :D

The rest of the room is watching the altercation with shock, no one wanting to step forward and interfere with Sarah. Everyone in here knows that Sarah is a hard woman and those who have known her for a long time, believe that Cameron is the only thing keeping Sarah on an even keel. And they don’t feel much sympathy for the guy, he had been warned previously to not mess with Cameron, but apparently he decided to not listen. - I like that Sarah's the one they're scared of

“Can I kick him?” Cameron asks Sarah hopefully. - Hehehe

“You two! Take him to the medic. His screams are annoying me.” - Heh

The "kick 'em when they're down" convo was cute.

“You are such a girl.” / “That makes you the butch. You should have John throw you a Butch-lor party tonight.” - Ha!

“I love what ever you write for me.” - Neat little nuance, based on their history of loops

“Where are you taking me for our honeymoon.” / Sarah smirks and shakes her head, “Three days locked in our room with food and water ( ... )

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wkgreen February 27 2010, 20:39:23 UTC
Thanks revolos55. And while Cameron is the more dangerous, Sarah is the more unpredictable. Heh, unpredictability is Sarah's stock and trade, which means people are not sure what she is going to do. And of course, if she asked Cameron to do something for her, Cameron would happily do it. :)

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