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Sarah/Cameron: Time Loop 22

May 16, 2010 03:08

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MOAR! sscout June 12 2010, 00:16:09 UTC

Remembering all the small things Cameron does for her, how she is always answering questions, explaining things instead of telling Cameron to look it up. <-- I think the second Cameron should be a Sarah?
Cameron stops in mid-sentence as her lovers eyebrows gather <-- lover's
underlining structure that is different then a humans <-- than
her body scared from the many battles <-- scarred
fingers lightly side up and down the long, <-- slide
one starting before others have stop, <-- stopped
what Cameron did foods her mind, <-- floods
feeling more rested then she can remember, <-- than
they made themselves scare for the day.” <-- scarce
and thinks more then she had during the rest of her life, <-- than, there's a syntax error somewhere but I'm too sleepy
leans forward to kiss Sarah deeply <-- deeply. unless this means there's more? :)~

I mean, I need more, I can't wait for more x.xº

Re: MOAR! wkgreen June 12 2010, 20:24:09 UTC

Thanks for the corrections. :)

I got several more stories in my head, just have to get some quiet time to write them in. :)

Re: MOAR! wkgreen July 26 2010, 23:58:45 UTC

her tongue pushing into[-to] past the soft,

whether Cameron was just a machine or was more the[-e+a]n a machine,

I think I only skimmed through once I realized I had already read this one too, still, found two!

From an email sscout sent me. :)
Heh, 100 people could probably proofread my stories and each of them would find some error. ;)

olli01a July 24 2010, 00:42:21 UTC

Wonderful how Sarah took care of Cameron and made their firts time special. Sarah acceped Cameron as what she is not wanting her to pretend to be human.

wkgreen July 24 2010, 03:25:02 UTC

Thanks! :) For them to work, Sarah has to accept what Cameron is, trying to do anything different will lead to failed relationship...hmmmm.

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Re: Twitches wkgreen July 7 2011, 07:20:51 UTC

No idea how you missed it, but glad you found it! :)

Thanks for commenting and reading. :)

anonymous March 25 2012, 01:42:02 UTC

Am rereading these, and was just struck by something - if this is the 22nd time Cameron's gone back, why would she be running a program during sex?

Other than that, this whole series is amazing, and I'm hoping that you continue writing them - there are no shortages for ideas with this concept.

wkgreen March 25 2012, 03:23:58 UTC

Because Cameron has to let Sarah teach her again. :)

I have several ideas, but unfortunately have writers block. (sighs)