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storm_8 July 25 2010, 16:58:02 UTC
Well, that ending is... Humm, I'm going to have to ponder that - paradox indeed!
I do love that Sarah asks for a last kiss... So bittersweet!

I also love the way you describe every step they take, from the moment they get into the building to the moment they come out again - provides a good picture of what is going on without being too detailed.

And I'm rambling hehe. As usual, I love your Time Loops!

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wkgreen July 25 2010, 20:06:21 UTC
Thanks storm_8. Hmm... while pondering, don't get lost in the paradoxes. ;)

I love doing action scenes. :)

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wkgreen July 25 2010, 20:06:56 UTC
Thanks nvr_sk_to_til. Time paradoxes are fun to play with. :)

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olli01a July 25 2010, 20:02:55 UTC
If this is the end of your series it fits perfectly. No matter what Sarah and Cameron are doing they are trapped in a time loop. The last kiss was so sad.

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wkgreen July 25 2010, 20:08:41 UTC
Thanks olli1a. And nope, not the end of the series. I actually started a different Time Loop and had to stop half way through when I realized I should get this one out first. :)

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olli01a July 25 2010, 20:43:44 UTC
Good to hear that this is not the end... errr... I think "end" is relative. Maybe Einstein could explain it...?

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wkgreen July 26 2010, 01:37:44 UTC
Heh, I would love to talk to Einstein about it! :)

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thorstochter July 25 2010, 20:31:21 UTC
Goooood one! Thanks! I think the end is perfect. No Paradox in my eyes. The future is happening, one way or another, and there will always be Cameron :-) Only Problem after this loop, Camerons Loops start again from Loop 1! Don't they?

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wkgreen July 26 2010, 01:39:10 UTC
Hmm. do they? Am I following any order in when the Time Loops come out? >:)

Thanks thorstochter. Glad you enjoyed it and liked the end. :)

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thorstochter July 26 2010, 12:35:39 UTC
No, you don't follow any order, this makes the series so fascinating! :-)

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wkgreen July 26 2010, 12:46:15 UTC
Fun to write too. :)

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fig_aruna July 25 2010, 22:00:05 UTC
Not sure I understand the paradox (I'm pretty happily time theory-stupid *g*), but I loved this all the same. You do real-time action like no one else, and the ending was haunting in a beautifully concealed way. Thanks for writing and sharing!

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wkgreen July 26 2010, 01:42:57 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting fig_aruna. I could explain it, but then you would have to loose your innocence on time theory. ;)

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