It's been awhile, hasn't it? I wouldn't say I'm back, exactly, but here's a story.
.on the lam
in which a tea kettle explodes, yusuf keeps his wits about him in the face of unprecedented adversity (read: a bear), and ariadne tames a raven. written for
this prompt.
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i am torn between twirling you around in happiness just because you exist (which is not to imply that you don't exist outside of the internet, only that there's no chance for me to twirl you there) and being full of ~feelings for Yusuf, and for Ariadne, and all the things they want and don't have and do have.
and the raven. the Raven.
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& thank you for commenting, &c., &c. Seriously, I am always glad when a story hits the mark (whatever the mark is--I guess I mean when emotions ring true) because sometimes when I'm writing it it's hard to tell. This one--I started over a month ago (!) so some things have gone through a few iterations and I wasn't always sure what I was doing. Yeah. But ~feelings are what I'm usually doing.
And hello again!
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I liked Ariadne a lot. She's very put together in the movie, getting over the omg!dreaming! thing pretty quickly. I like to imagine that she'd roll with the punches and have hidden depths, like you've written for her here. Lovely!
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Of course we wouldn't have know half of what was going on without Ariadne's character, but I also liked her for her nosiness, her clear-eyed wonder, and her highly developed sense of accountability. <3
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This is such a lovely story. I adore BAMF Ariadne, and ambiguously untrustworthy Yusuf, and how they navigate all the things they're not saying. Your Ariadne is my favorite Ariadne. <3
Also! *GIANT HUG* Hi there, darling, you have been missed! <333
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ANYWAY, I'm glad you enjoyed this. I feel like with my Ariadne/Yusuf fics I've been gradually circling specific characterizations, which can kind of be summed up as Ariadne being tough and Yusuf being untrustworthy. Which is by contrast to my Arthur/Eames, where my characterization is all over the map and I like it that way. But that's how they make sense to me--pretty dysfunctional and bad at communication, but fitting together nonetheless.
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