Tenipuri

[wlupercalia]

I withheld this for a few days (till I think it's in danger of never seeing the light of the world, so here it goes)... due to usual esteem issues cos I wanted to look it over and check up on the canon info. Shame to say, I did neither. >> I can't stand reading it somehow. eugh. and I'm quite certain of the canon facts, i think (/excuses)

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[cosmiko]

This was great! Very enjoyable reading. XD You've got them all so them. No problems with guessing who's who at all (except a little problem with Kawamura's, but that was because I read wrongly that it was the baby who went *cough*violent. ^^; But it was ok on second read). I squeal "it's so cuuuuttee" when picturing the scenes you've described. (Cuteness from them as little kiddies.) Inui's and Kaidoh's especially cracked me up. You've even managed to get Ryoma in. XD And I thought the last lines was a cute end too. Tennis equipment being revealed as the Ultimate Babysitter's Tool! XD

Though I just wonder... "Horio Yorie"... is there any significance in that? (As in, did you intend her to be related to Horio, or merely using that family name for the need to use something?)

[coil]

Yay~ It's liked~ X3 (>>; violent... baby?)

Hehe, very little. (The 'two years of experience' line and er, maybe even how Horio-the-annoying went into tennis) It just popped up so I put it in.

[cosmiko]

Ahh, I see. I didn't think too much about that line. ^^; But now that you mention it - ahh.