Comments | wmetoile: I give you just one page

wmetoile

I give you just one page

Apr 12, 2010 22:01

In this world of WTF. Seriously, I have already yelled at this book five or six times and I'm only on page 17. Obviously I'm not getting through 100 pages tonight. So I thought I'd share a few of the things that made me yell, just on this one page.

A little background: Mac has been hired as a bodyguard for Emma and her horse, Navigator, who is a ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

Not anonymous, Suzanne anonymous April 13 2010, 22:54:21 UTC

I think - THINK - the author means "in the line of duty." Which is actually how I read it the first time and couldn't understand why you didn't get what she was saying.

Also, I think I've read this book. Twice.

Re: Not anonymous, Suzanne wmetoile April 13 2010, 23:08:26 UTC

Yeah, I corrected it to "in the line of duty." It's not so much that it's confusing as it is redundant. The whole book is a festival of confusing and/or redundant, though. It's making me very angry.

trappedinabay April 19 2010, 20:47:50 UTC

"She was prude-lite."

WHAT.

wmetoile April 19 2010, 20:55:00 UTC

I DON'T KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS.