I honestly hope you are not being serious... on word! hahahaha... so are you actually going to make a website? I transferred money to pay off my overdraft this week so that I can pay for hosting now! Back to the constructive criticism... seen as your asking for it!
[criticism begins...] er... I don't know, not much to say really, cos thats your style and it looks okay in that style! Only thing that looked strange on first glance was the feet, probably because the lines aren't as heavy as the rest of the image! I could say things like add colour or something, but I like it as it is... If Gary saw it he may say, Paul doesn't like manga, but its not really that manga style, and I imaging your dad saying its babyish - cos he always says that, but I can't think of anything to say... other than the feet! *thumbs up* [...end criticism]
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Ill show you my primary character idea...
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And yep, decent linkage indeed!
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[criticism begins...] er... I don't know, not much to say really, cos thats your style and it looks okay in that style! Only thing that looked strange on first glance was the feet, probably because the lines aren't as heavy as the rest of the image! I could say things like add colour or something, but I like it as it is... If Gary saw it he may say, Paul doesn't like manga, but its not really that manga style, and I imaging your dad saying its babyish - cos he always says that, but I can't think of anything to say... other than the feet! *thumbs up* [...end criticism]
All done!
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