Okay; Amber Minho [f(x)/SHINee]

Sep 10, 2010 21:30

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Amber | Minho ⇒ you're not very good at that

A/N: 1-hour challenge with todefinebeauty using the SMTown prompt generator! To get our creative juices flowing, among other things.

The discomfort of the backpack under his head returns as he realizes again where they are. )

pairing: amber/minho

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todefinebeauty September 11 2010, 05:30:15 UTC
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH. "Blanket?" with no blankets! And "Really," he adds, like it would emphasize how okay it is. I can hear Minho saying this, lol. And Amber being the worst orienteering partner in the world :3 And the snuggle that isn't really a snuggle reads as very them, even though it's not something I could've seen prior to reading this. And the dialogue feels necessary, not just like filler for something else occurring before/after. DIALOGUE. Which is so difficult, like all the time.

I enjoyed this!! Very much. I really like your descriptions and characterizations here... again, it feels very much like them. And that it was done within an hour! The pacing is perfect, too. ARGH just OKAY I kind of love this agrghagdfglk reads again ;__;

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wobaozhewo September 12 2010, 07:10:08 UTC
I'm always happy when you like something I wrote for you |D (Well, that is obvs, but I'm saying it anyway.)

The dialogue actually came out surprisingly fast. Like, the last 25 minutes. lol And the end, I was about to type 'snuggle' but I have to say, Minho would only snuggle if another person initiates, and Amber doesn't seem like one to initiate. But he would have his own way of showing that he cared, and that he wants physical intimacy, even innocent gestures like this. Haha, this was my long-winded nanosecond analysis haha.

Truth be told, gutter thoughts first. And then this was supposed to be crack, but it turned out sweet instead. There are a million things wrong with that. lol

Yay! We finished things!♥ Thank you for HoYeon~ 8)))

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deasyellow September 11 2010, 12:30:37 UTC
Honestly, I've never even imagined them together. But you make it works, somehow, and I need more of Amber/Minho now ♥

This is beautiful :')

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wobaozhewo September 12 2010, 07:12:19 UTC
Oh? :) Haha, I don't know why it was so easy for me to see them interacting. Probably because I view Amber as f(x)'s female Minho XD

hehe, thank you♥

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mawaru_berry September 11 2010, 23:52:33 UTC
aw, this was really cute! I liked this a lot, and I'm always into ships that are kinda(/just plain) rare :D ♥ cute dialogue, too :)

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wobaozhewo September 12 2010, 07:14:17 UTC
lolol, oh yes. I know the feeling. non-existent ships are sort of my trademark, it seems, outside of qmi. lol well, non-existant otp, anyway ,_,

glad you liked!^^

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mawaru_berry September 12 2010, 14:53:20 UTC
haha, well it's really nice knowing that there are more people in fandom who like the non-existent ships, too XD

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wobaozhewo September 13 2010, 05:34:24 UTC
/dies with blohyuk

HAHA♥ >_>

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souless_misses September 13 2010, 19:27:57 UTC
I love it!!! And yes the dialogue is just so cute and totally Amber/Minho like.
You did an awesome work!

I've always loved this pairing but i can't find fics with them, i've only found 2 including this one.

Someone needs to write more MinBer cause they're awesome together.

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wobaozhewo September 15 2010, 23:55:25 UTC
Sorry for the late reply!

Thanks! :) Minho/Amber needs to be written more :| I haven't seen any other fics, actually. Maybe one? But I don't remember haha :/ Hopefully, I'll give them more love another day |D

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mrs_keroro September 18 2010, 16:30:11 UTC
O.O

Amber/Minho

YOU REALIZE
THIS IS
MY HET!OTP
RIGHT?

I love you.

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wobaozhewo September 19 2010, 17:17:36 UTC
Aww, more people should ship this 8) kekeke

I'm glad you enjoyed it~ 8D Thaaaank youuuu~ /humbly accepts your love♥

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