Comments | woekitten: It's a writing.

woekitten

It's a writing.

Jan 27, 2013 22:52

You know what's hard?

Writing about the month of May during a bad cold snap.

Know what's harder?

Writing seriously about miscarriage when you'vLOSS.JPG LOSS.JPG LOSS.JPG B^U B^U B^U B^U B^U B^U B^U B^U B^U B^UKnow what's the hardest ( Read more... )

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beeblebabe January 28 2013, 08:02:31 UTC

Iiiiif you actually were looking for constructive criticism, my only suggestion would to be to kill as many of the non-"said" speech words as possible. Said is best! Just use 'said.' Let the dialogue itself do the heavy lifting. I'm no adverb hater like some famous authors we know, but I will ride the 'just use said!' train to the ground.

woekitten January 28 2013, 08:21:48 UTC

I'm a big believer in the power of "said," but sometimes I lose confidence and cave in. XD

woekitten January 29 2013, 03:40:35 UTC

(PS thank you!!!)

saltedpin February 1 2013, 08:14:22 UTC

Caillou could always feel his blood thaw with the coming of the warm weather. Simply, he could put up with winter because he never got tired of watching the world wake up again.
I like all of this and am intrigued to find out more more more about these guys, but the above just struck me in paticular :D

woekitten February 3 2013, 05:29:19 UTC

Thanks, man. :D Yeah, I have strong feelings about springtime.