Comments | wonder_1859: Fic: These Scars We Wear

wonder_1859

Fic: These Scars We Wear - 20/?

Nov 24, 2012 18:50

Obligatory disclaimer: Not mine and never will be. All credit goes to GRRM. I’m just playing with his toys while he’s not looking. I promise to return them in as good a shape as I found them.
Summary: Sandor Clegane discovers that death does not always mark the end of a life. Sometimes it's only the beginning. Spoilers up to and including A Feast ( Read more... )

sandor cleagne, sansa stark, au, fanfic, asoiaf

Comments 9

annestark November 25 2012, 01:49:40 UTC

Some of the best non-smut smut I've ever read!

And I love that it didn't just solve everything. Too many times you read fics where, once SanSan do the dirty, everything is just peachy and they suddenly are able to get married and live happily ever after.

I appreciate that you've left that conflict there at the end -- and poor, clueless Sandor. What was he planning? After all this did he really think she'd allow him to just drop her off at the front gate? Could he really stand by and watch Stannis marry her off?

Poor, poor Sandor. So much to learn about how to deal with women!

caroh99 November 25 2012, 04:19:03 UTC

Touching absolutley beautiful chapter! love the poetic way you wrote it and all the things left unsaid between them were so evident to the reader that it was magical! loved it from the start to the end- next update soon please? :)

irismoongarden November 25 2012, 07:32:27 UTC

my thoughts on the last chapter was that i approved of the fade to black, because alot of first-times in reality are awkward and only endearing to those involved, so i loved how you made mention of how they had to learn about each other and play in the lovemaking.

love this, its one of my 2 favorite stories im following right now. My favorite part of this chapter was him praying at her bedside.

maroucya November 25 2012, 15:17:22 UTC

I loved everythng about this chapter.
Hope Sansa won't stay mad at Sandor for too long...

wolfgirl31 November 25 2012, 16:02:01 UTC

introspection and hidden landmines - so true :)

I liked the insights into his past and how he became the Hound and also the effect Sansa had on him in King's Landing (and now of course, hehe)

And then the conflict at the end. Poor Sandor and Sansa. I wonder how things will work out for them...