I can feel every line in this poem, and the photos you add with them add so much- that last one, with the honey sun!!! Wow. Also, you're a "closer," as my old writing professor used to call it- you always have a last line that wraps the whole poem up and punches hard and makes you feel it.
Wow! 😱 such kind words. I feel like there’s things I always want to say a little bit better than I can string them together. But you make me feel like I do better than I think.
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I can feel every line in this poem, and the photos you add with them add so much- that last one, with the honey sun!!! Wow. Also, you're a "closer," as my old writing professor used to call it- you always have a last line that wraps the whole poem up and punches hard and makes you feel it.
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Wow! 😱 such kind words. I feel like there’s things I always want to say a little bit better than I can string them together. But you make me feel like I do better than I think.
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