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Bathroom Tiles

Aug 16, 2008 00:27

Title: Bathroom Tiles
Author: wontonxx
Rating: PG ?
Genre: Really bad attempt at angst ?
Length: one shot ; around 647 words
Pairing: HanKyung/Siwon
Warning: AU, total OOC-ness x.x
Disclaimer: I would like to own them, but sadly..no

A/N eek, hope it isn't too bad.

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Comments 10

crimsontenshi August 16 2008, 21:11:27 UTC

Wow....I love this fic...so sad (becuase Shinhan in my opinion belong together forever and Hankyung can't leave), but so unbelievably detailed and beautiful.

I know exactly how you feel with being nervous. I just joined here too. But believe me you have nothing to worry about. I can't wait to read more of your fanfictions. =^_^=

wontonxx August 17 2008, 07:34:58 UTC

lol, thanks! im glad you liked it.
i can't wait to read more of yours too ;]

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wontonxx August 17 2008, 07:33:58 UTC

haha, thanks!
im happy that you commented because
i really admire your writing =]

wings_strength9 August 17 2008, 06:04:35 UTC

gorgeous.

gorgeous, and captivating, and heartbreaking and ♥ T.T
honestly if I could quote the whole thing I would. I tried to pick a favorite paragraph, but it didn't work 8D all of them are amazing.

He thinks he should have taken all those moments chasing away sleep holding him down beside him. I loved the style of these lines. the regret kinda kills D:

Sometimes he thinks he can still hear the whisper of his friends claiming him “whipped!” Back then he knew better than to deny the truth. 8D oh Siwon. you know it's true.

It was the way Hankyung frantically collected his things, tears dripping from his eyes to cracks between bathroom tiles. Siwon only watched from the doorway that connected to the bedroom before hearing a sharp cry. I think, just the image of Geng desperatly trying to get his things while crying, and Siwon just watching him helpless from the door made me want to cry too. And the razor was a nice touch, it really was one of the well added in small bits ( ... )

wontonxx August 17 2008, 07:32:09 UTC

hehe, you're comment made me smile =]
thanks for reading, i'm glad you enjoyed it.<3

dark_hunterjenn August 18 2008, 03:10:46 UTC

What a haunting fic, your writing is simply wonderful! I hope to see more from you.

unangelichalo August 18 2008, 22:21:56 UTC

Ouch, this hurts... but I love the way it's written ♥♥♥
This is such a nice take on the theme. Considering how many people do these themes, it's difficult to do something original, but this is definitely one of those that stands out.
Please write more!! (Especially SiHan XD)