fading away pt 2/2

Sep 27, 2010 17:31

Title: Fading Away
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3130 (a total of 6486)
Summary: There is a piece of paper lying on the hallway floor, and Jonghyun just can't bring himself to touch it.
A/N: and here is the second part~ i figured id do it tomorrow but dinners soon and i kinda wanna get this up on shinee replay. maybe i can score some comments while im gone ( Read more... )

pairing: minho/key, fic, pairing: jonghyun/onew

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dongbangsuju20 September 27 2010, 21:57:57 UTC
T_T Jinki a ghost too?
I didn't get it at first but after reading it a second time... DDD:
I knew Taemin did this! >: fuu
and and then how Taemin was split into two parts ;~;
and jinki fading too (although I though that was kinda strange bc I thought it was like who came first into this would be gone first, so it should have been Jonghyun and not jinki lol... my logic)
and jonghyun ;~~~~~; /holds him

but like I don't get the ending, I mean the explanation :|
like what's up with the paper?
and how did Taemin get into this non-reality? and idk lol
not getting this thing in it's whole meaning :| but that's me I think

but the ending is good :D so positive and happy ;; ♥

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woocheeks September 27 2010, 22:26:30 UTC
yup, jinki turned into a ghost when jongtae kissed~
yeah it is kinda hard to explain, i didnt want to go too far into explanations while i was trying to wrap the whole thing up.
the paper connects all of them to reality, but also connects jonghyun to taemin. and because taemin connects jinki to jonghyun, jinki starts to fade, at least in jonghyuns eyes.
sorry its so confusing, but thanks for reading anyhow ;A; ♥

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jess71194 September 27 2010, 22:33:22 UTC
Holy....

This is one of the best. fics. I've. ever. read.

I'm serious.... I'm in love with it.

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woocheeks September 27 2010, 22:42:19 UTC
;A;
♥ thank you so much
youve made me a happy woman ♥
have more hearts
♥♥♥♥

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itachibana13 September 27 2010, 23:26:59 UTC
i want to be the kind of author that can cause such emotion in people.

hi you are me.

BUT DKJF;AKL \O/ YOU FINISHED IT AND THERE IS JONGYU AND MY PRECIOUS SON TAEMIN IS THERE AND PAPERS ARE CLEARLY MAGICAL OBJECTS CAPABLE OF DESTROYING THE WORLD AND DSKJFD;AKJFK;LAA;SKLF

i loved it. it was awesome and cool and jonghyun crying makes me a sad person and MINKEY ♥ 8D EXCEPT YOU NEVER FOCUSED ON JONGYU MAKEOUT SCENE LIKE I TOLD YOU TO. HDU WOMAN.

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woocheeks September 27 2010, 23:30:50 UTC
indeed i am.

YES IM SO GLAD I FINALLY FINISHED SOMETHING SDFDSKFHDSFLDJKSF AND YES MY FRIEND WAS LIKE "I PICKED THIS PIECE OF PAPER OFF THE FLO--" IM LIKE "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHSDJFLHDSLKFJPUTITBACK"

im glad you did ♥ makes me sad too and YES I LOVE MINKEY AND IM SORRY ILL WRITE THAT SOME OTHER TIME K

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itachibana13 September 28 2010, 00:37:28 UTC
we are one. fusion! /o/\o\

IKR I'M GLAD YOU FINISHED IT I'M JUST NOT GLAD YOU BEAT ME IN FINISHING IT. GDI I WAS BEING A GOOD KID AND DOING HW. SADFKJA;KLDFJ GOOD THING YOU MADE HER NOT PICK IT UP. WHO KNOWS WHERE SHE COULD BE NOW.

YOU BETTER WRITE MORE NEXT TIME OKAY? OKAY. AND MINKEEEEEEEEYYYYY.

and omg your icon is just full of greatness.

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woocheeks September 28 2010, 00:34:28 UTC
thank you SO much! ♥
im glad, this was one of those stories that was basically writing itself, i honestly had no idea what i was doing til about halfway through xD
im so happy you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and commenting ♥

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imhappi September 28 2010, 00:57:06 UTC
zomg crying T__T
dunno

just..
ugh
that was amazing
T____T

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