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"The Crickets Have Arthritis

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[flowersneverdie]

there's entirely too many similes in there. :/

you obviously dont understand poetry

[flowersneverdie]

Too many similes? You complain about the amount of similes as if the number and use of literary devices define the quality of a poem. but the beauty, hope, faith, and genuine love portrayed in this poem is that of the quality we find when we use love instead of language to communicate. and unfortunately not everyone, including yourself, understands this principle.