As Time Passes (Merlin Fanfic)

[woodsgal]

Title:  As Time Passes
Author: Woodsgal
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2860
Disclaimer: I do not own Merlin sadly.
Spoilers: Up to the end of season 2 to be safe, especially episode 12.

Summary: Time has passed and Morgana has grown powerful, Merlin needs to encourage her to re-join them but when they meet things do not go to plan. Hearts are stirred and

Comments

[twilighthdfan]

I think the randomness was very good. Poor Merlin. And I'm glad Gwen was there to convince Arthur to go after him. Great story. Loved it :).

[woodsgal]

It wasn't that good randomness but thank you for saying it is. Poor Merlin and it was a good job Gwen was there. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting. Love your icon by the way.

[adeina_rhyddha]

Psh, you know your randomness is awesome.
SEE. I EVEN CAME ON BEFORE COLLEGE TO COMMENT FOR YOU. FEEL LOVED, DAMNIT.
Anyway.
This was great. Poor Merlin. =[
And poor Arthur.
But it all turned out okay in the end, because you are a gigantic sap, and I love you for it. x3

[woodsgal]

No, i know my randomness is bad. I FEEL SLIGHTLY LOVED BUT LOOK THE COMMENT GROUND IS BARREN. Very poor Merlin and Arthur but my inability to write a sad ending led to a sappy ending as usual. XD well someone has to love me for my sap ha ha. Thanks for commenting and now i shall wait and see if anyone else likes this.

[adeina_rhyddha]

>=[
DO NOT MAKE ME CYBAR SLAP JOO. PHEAR MAH CYBAR SLAP AND SAY GOOD THINGS ABOUT YOUR AWESOME RANDOMNESS, DAMNIT.
Y'know why you haven't got many comments? Because it is so awesome people can't even think what to say.
*Nodnod*
I love you for your sap. It's epic shiz. xD
My sap is worse, because my sap usually involves copious amounts of fluff.

[woodsgal]

GO ON THEN CYBER SLAP ME BIZZATCH!...*Hides*. No, no one comments because it's rubbish XP. My sap is random as hell, your fluffy sap is sweet.

[ebonyfeather]

This was great- I loved the imagery at the start as Merlin and Morgana faced each other, and the ending was really sweet.

[woodsgal]

KITTY WANTS A HUG *hugs the kitty in your icon*. Sorry, couldn't resist ^^;.

I'm glad you liked the imagery, I tried really hard with it though I was randomly typing it at school out of boredem.

The ending was sappy ha ha.

I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting.

[ebonyfeather]

Nothing wrong with writing at school- I used to do most of my writing on the bus on my way to work.

[anonymous]

This was quite an amazing story. I'm not kidding. :) The descriptive words were awesome and I swear I was watching everything happen. Morgana wasn't necessarily OOC because at this point she HAD been poisoned by Merlin and therefore had a very good reason to resent him. It all worked well together.

Hm... two small things. When you use 'forwards', I'm pretty sure it should just be 'forward' with no 's'. Not positive, but maybe it's something to look into. The other thing is my favorite part of the writing. I loved how the leaves 'waved' goodbye to Merlin as he passed out. It just have me the funniest mental image. But at the same time it was meaningful. I loved it.

Great story all around. It would make for a great actual episode of Merlin. :)

Lil Enchantress

[woodsgal]

I attempted to make it very descriptive so I'm glad that the description worked. Yeah, she had been poisoned by Merlin but I'm not sure if she'd act like that much of a psycho bitch...hmmm we'll have to wait and see.

Okay, I'll look into the forward thing.

Yes, the leaves seemed to be waving hinm goodbye because of the wind and he thought he was going to die =3. I thought it would some interesting imagery anyway.

An actual episode...ha ha, if only. But BBC would be all 'No homosexuality. We'll have the British public in uproar about what we show in a family show!" *snorts. That was a nice thing to say though ha ha.

I'm glad you enjoyed it and yay, thanks for commenting.

[book_worm_vicky]

Amazing! *is not late commenting* ;)

The description, especially at the start with Morgana was just... stunning. I have no words. It was really, truly amazing. You showed Arthur's emotions beautifully, and the descriptions created an amazingly vivid image in my mind. Stunning.

[woodsgal]

XD you're not really late on commenting on this one...on my Office AU however...you're getting later and later comment posting time as you haven't commented on that yet ha ha.

I was attempting to write something mainly descriptive. I wanted evil Morgana but I didn't think that would turn out all any good if it was a lot of action and speak. Also description can fill out stories ha ha. I'm glad you thought it was good though because I tried really hard with it.

The emotions, especially Arthur and Morgana's were a bit of a worry, I was worried I'd make them OOC...which I did with Morgana but anyway XP.

It wasn't stunning but I'm glad you enjoyed it =3.

[book_worm_vicky]

I'm so sorry about that! Posted now, as you can see! God, I'm so thick *facepalm*

Yeah, it was wonderful! Does it make sense if I say that the effort didn't come through? It was so easy and flowing, at least to read. I guess that does take a lot of effort to produce, so I guess the effort did come through in the end... what was I saying again?

No, I can see how Morgana would feel like that, and atm we don't really know how she is feeling, I don't think it was OOC. No need to worry about them!

*sighs* You and Adeina both! *throws hand up in despair* It was stunning, and I adored it!

[woodsgal]

You're not thick!

Yeah, it makes sense. I did put a lot of effort in though so I hope it's flowing and easy to read.

Yeah...I mean Morgana is gonna be pissed off, I know that but she just seemed a little psycho...and sounded a little like a dominatrix...so that's really bad ha ha.

Yeah, we're both terrible like that. We're both terrible hypocrites ha ha. I'm glad you adored it =3.