Story for a writting exercise

[woodstock12]

Connor’s Room
Author: Woodstock12
Word Count: 327
Disclaimer: Primeval not mine at all.
Rating: K
Author’s Note: This is for a writing exercise by joe reaves. Any mistakes are mine since it was not looked over before I put it up. If there are any big problems , please tell me.
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Comments

[arianedevere]

the family the taker of the pictures always wanted but never quite had during childhood

Oh God. That line made me cry!

[woodstock12]

Don't cry...
::Give hug::
thank you for reading

[zoi_no_miko]

I know ;___; Poor Connor.

[joereaves]

You paint a very vivid picture. I love that he has gun safety and talking to women for dummies on his bookshelf :D And the lego TARDIS! The photos are very poignant.

[woodstock12]

Thank you for reading.

[fredbassett]

That was very sweet :)

As Joe said, I think you need to actually join Denial before you can post to it. And if you'd ever like any beta help, you're welcome to email me. My address is on my profile page.

[woodstock12]

Oh well...at least I can still comment and stuff.
I just might take up the beta offer at a later date.

[fredbassett]

According to you profile, you are a member of Denial, so you should be able to post as well as comment. Let me know if you have any problems and I'll see what I can do to help. And the beta offer is always open.

[deinonychus_1]

awww, yes, that sounds like Connor's room, alright. But meep to the photographs, that's so sad, poor Connor.

[canadian_jay]

Oh my! Very nice, very nice. Love the 'for dummies' books you hint at. xP