Fic: Memories as a Teacup Chapter 14

[wook77]

Title: Memories as a Teacup: Chapter 14
Author: wook77
Pairing:: Dean/Seamus (other slash and het pairings contained within)
Rating: PG (Eventual rating: Hard R to NC-17)
100quills prompt: 5. Fixed
Warnings: Canon compliant through DH. Pre-Epilogue. Additional Warnings at the beginning of Chapter 1.
Wordcount: Overall: ~70k This part: 2300
Summary: Four

Comments

[darespeak]

:D
everyone loves a cliffhanger :P

[wook77]

They definitely do :D

[true_masquerade]

I love Seamus and Ron's easy relationship, the way they both give it as good as they get ;-) The banter seems like a good grown-up extension of Ron's personality. (I hope that made even a little bit of sense!) And I loved this bit :-D

Hermione starts talking about her work and I end up just smiling and nodding except when she looks pissed then I try to scowl a bit.

Oh, Ron! I love it.

And I love Farrah and Kerry, do they get to be in more of the story?

[wook77]

I'm so beyond glad that you mentioned the Ron in this because I'm not very good at Ron (and by not very good, I mean, I'm rubbish at it).

Poor Ron - after all these years, he still doesn't quite get how Hermione works :D.

I'm fairly certain that they're in one more scene. I've been looking through the story and I think they're both in that one scene. They are lots of fun, aren't they? They were really fun to write because I got to just type out the most random conversations.

♥ for commenting.

[true_masquerade]

No, I like your Ron! I think you've let him be cooler than people tend to do. Not rubbish at all!

I'm looking forward to this week's installment :D

[writersblock76]

Loved it, particularly with that nice little cliffhanger (yay, Dennis!). But I do get the feeling you're building to something intensely bad, and for that I'm scared. *whimpers* Can't wait till the next chapter!

[wook77]

:( Everyone thinks I'm going to do something horrible. You never know, it might be something very nice indeed :D. Dennis is ♥.

New chapter coming tomorrow!

[star98hope]

Yay, I'm caught up!

I'm glad Dean's started to re-connect with his family. His sisters are great! Nice for them to give Dean some reassurance about his relationship with Seamus.

I hope nothing crazy happens at the hearing. :\

And Dennis is alive! Phew! Looking forward to hearing what he's been up to....

[wook77]

:D YAYES!!!

I commented above with this but I'll repeat here... I think that it's important at this point for Dean to connect with his family. He's in the heart of Wizarding Britain and his mum was willing to come to him even though he's doing that she doesn't support and he's willing to put up with her coddling while there because they both love one another. I never wanted to actually villainize (is that even a word?) her but I wanted to show her as an over-protective mum.

I think it depends on your definition of crazy!

Yes! Still alive for now! He's awesome, isn't he?

♥ you for commenting!

[oconel]

Dennis is back!! I hope that's not a sign of trouble.

I'm glad that Dean and his mum are talking. They'll work it out. :D

And I love the fact that Dean and Seamus still attract each other, with or without Dean's memories.

[wook77]

oh man :(. Everyone thinks I'm going to be absolutely horrible to Dennis.

They will work it out :D

They do and I think it's lovely that no matter what, they're attracted to one another. It's not just the history there. There's more.

♥