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Two In One [PG-13; Koizumi/Otani]

Apr 26, 2007 03:15

Title: Two In One
Author: worblehat
Genre: Lovely Complex
Pairing: Koizumi/Otani
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Dedicated to goldie, if she reads it. For helping me get into an awesome series. ♥ I bet this will be AU as soon as volume 22 is scanlated. Let's pretend it's not though. Also, written for prompt_a_day.
Prompt: Duality.
Word Count: 2,204

( Two In One )

medium, gen aud, lovecom

Comments 20

hope_assassin May 29 2007, 06:34:02 UTC

Awww, that was just so cute! I absolutely adored it! You definitely have a knack at writing LoveCom stories. I love the way you portray the characters perfectly and how you make their interactions as heart-warming as they are in the manga! I absolutely loved this!

worblehat May 29 2007, 06:36:49 UTC

Hah, thanks! I like cute fic, it leaves me feeling more uplifted. Plus it's nice when I can manage to write them more IC than not. I'm so happy you enjoyed this one too. ♥

biases August 1 2007, 05:13:31 UTC

Oh, lovely. I haven't been able to find much in the way of Love Com fanfic, but this is a great story and I enjoyed it immensely. Very cute, and going into the mems. :)

worblehat August 5 2007, 15:34:30 UTC

Thanks for giving this a try! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

blackestfaery August 14 2007, 14:25:07 UTC

Ah, my first Love Comm fanfiction -- and it definitely didn't disappoint!

Mem'd ♥

worblehat August 14 2007, 18:35:07 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the read and the comment. ♥

"SQUEE!"-That About Sums It Up innocent_luff August 18 2007, 22:17:45 UTC

I've read a lot of the very few LoveCom fanfics and I have to say, this one of-or probably is-the best I've read. You got everyone one in character, your writing skill is truly amazing, and you made me smile and giggle quite a few times (It seems that, when you mix "Lovecom" and "Good Things" together, that is usually the result). It was just great, and ten times as cute. I especially like what the two of them say once the alcohol was brought out: "I can't", "I promised my mom I wouldn't". It's what you'd expect to come from them. And even though I've never had alcohol before, I can almost experience what the feeling is like by the way you described it. It was great, just great. You're great. Good Job! =D

Re: "SQUEE!"-That About Sums It Up worblehat August 26 2007, 05:10:29 UTC

Thank you so much! I haven't found a lot of LoveCom fic yet but I think people are starting to write it a little more, now that the anime's out and all. I like having things in-character when possible, so I appreciate that that seems to have happened here. I apologise that it's taken so long to respond! :)