Five Times They Kissed [PG-13; Koizumi/Otani]

Apr 29, 2007 06:49

Title: Five Times They Kissed
Author: worblehat
Genre: Lovely Complex
Pairing: Koizumi/Otani
Rating: PG-13
Notes: Written for goldie (♥!) as part of that "five things/times/etc. ______ happened." My God, this is a helluva lot longer than I'd anticipated.
Prompt: "Five times Otani kissed Koizumi."
Word Count: 3,133

Five Times They Kissed )

medium, gen aud, lovecom

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worblehat April 30 2007, 20:32:00 UTC
Thanks, glad you liked it! I think they're completely awesome together. :)

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infi_inficio April 30 2007, 11:39:47 UTC
Instead it ended up being a forgotten touch of lips between a sick person and a desperate one, leaving Koizumi to mutter angrily about how she should have taken his birthday cake, just to spite him, and thrown it into the nearest trashcan.

I definitely remember that part, and I don't blame Koizumi for being angry. XD

This was a really adorable fic (uhh... couldn't find other words beside "cute" and the likes to describe it)... and that was lovely. It's nice to find Lovely Complex fanfics!

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worblehat April 30 2007, 20:32:59 UTC
Hahah, well I think most people would be at least a little put out in that situation.

Adorable fic works for me! And it is nice to find LoveCom fics, I hope to see a few more as the anime gets subbed and the manga gets translated. Thanks for reading!

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svz_insanity May 29 2007, 06:05:12 UTC
LoveCom fic exists! ♥♥♥ This is wonderful. So cute and sweet and totally in character. :D I hope I'm not being pushy when I say I hope you write more Lovely Complex fic. They're so few and hard to find!

Who needs enemies when your friends are dumbasses.

I think I just have new favorite quote. ♥

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worblehat May 29 2007, 06:09:57 UTC
That it does! I'm glad you enjoyed it - I try to be as IC when possible, so it's nice when it actually works out. Nope, not pushy at all! I know it's a difficult thing to find so I hope to contribute more later on. Thanks for reading, by the way!

Ahaha, excellent. ♥

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svz_insanity May 29 2007, 06:13:49 UTC
Oh, I wanted to add that I recced this over at my journal, I hope you don't mind. ♥ Hee. I hope goldie can nudge you to write more. I think when the series begins to get somewhere, it'll be easier for people to write fic since things are sort of uncertain right now (manga and anime-wise).

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worblehat May 29 2007, 06:17:25 UTC
Aww, thanks! I sincerely appreciate that and I don't mind at all. Hahahaha, I think if goldie nudged me anymore, I'd probably have to quit my job (I'm easily distracted, it seems). I think it's pretty easy to write fic whenever, and actually it's easier now I'd say because you only get parts of the story and can work more with different possibilities. That might just be me though.

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hope_assassin May 29 2007, 06:20:21 UTC
Waaaah! Sweetness incarnate! That was such a cute story! I absolutely adored it! I was longing to find something so nicely written like this! You're definitely the best, I can't find words to describe how smitten I am with your work.

Nice job!

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worblehat May 29 2007, 06:21:50 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! What an awesome compliment, thank you! For the feedback and for reading, I mean.

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hope_assassin May 29 2007, 06:50:59 UTC
Naturally, you are worth all the compliments I can come up with. I was just wondering now, since there seem to be so few stories about our all-time favourite couple, were you planning on writing another one? ^_^ I absolutely love your work--you're great at what you do, definitely, and your writing is really addictive. ^^ You're the best!

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worblehat May 29 2007, 06:53:06 UTC
Hahahahahah, oh man, I'm going to pretend this comment didn't happen or my ego will pretty much well. But I do appreciate it, definitely! As for writing...er, well I'm doing a short one right now so hopefully I'll get done and post it, but this one's more of a smutty thing than a cute piece. I dunno if you go for that or not - most people seem to so I'm guessing it'll be a safe bet? No idea. Anyway, thanks again! :)

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Kawaii! inuconen June 7 2007, 12:29:20 UTC
Aw that was so ciute!!! I luve otani and koizumi pairing there awesome together. That story was really touching ^-^

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Re: Kawaii! worblehat June 7 2007, 21:28:18 UTC
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for reading too. :)

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