Initiate [NC-17; Hitsugaya/Matsumoto]

May 10, 2007 02:23

Title: Initiate
Author: worblehat
Genre: Bleach
Pairing: Hitsugaya/Matsumoto
Rating: NC-17
Notes: There is not enough of this pairing. Also, this is meant to take place in Orihime's apartment, which will explain the clothing. Er. Semi-spoilers? Mostly smut, though.
Word Count: 771

Initiate )

bleach, adult, short

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worblehat May 10 2007, 16:23:55 UTC
I like having funny things happen in endings when possible, hah. Yay, ilu2, whee for MatsuHitsu! *|o|*

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athyestean May 10 2007, 12:39:30 UTC
*blush* T-That was hot... *deeper blush*

*cough* Brain is back! Now, I really can't help but appreciate the dynamics of the Hitsugaya and Matsumoto relationship and to say the least this story just works for me. For less than 1000 words I am left speechless and... very turned on.

P.S. Poor Orihime. Wait... Maybe not. Threesome?

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worblehat May 10 2007, 16:25:30 UTC
Oh thank God - it was meant to be hot! I haven't been able to write smut with this pairing for weeks now and they're one of my favourite so this is like...my fourth attempt and it's the shortest but I liked how it turned out, so. THANK YOU, I'm glad you enjoyed it the way it was intended! ♥

PS Matsutmoto seems like the inclusive type...

And that's all I'll say.

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quietscheboo May 10 2007, 15:14:48 UTC
it makes a very intimate mood I can closely feel with hitsugaya and matsumoto.

my compliments.. ;)

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worblehat May 10 2007, 16:26:22 UTC
Oh good, that was the mood I was going for. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it! ♥

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meritjubet May 12 2007, 05:43:50 UTC
I love this pairing. I liked the intensity, how it built up and then climaxed (okay, corniness here!) and then ended on a highly amusing note. Poor Orihime.

*smiles*

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worblehat May 12 2007, 05:46:12 UTC
I adore this pairing shamelessly. I'm glad the fic was decent and that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading. :)

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grass_angel May 19 2007, 11:03:33 UTC
*is giggling too much over the end*
Actually, I'm a bit amused over the entire thing, even though it was unbearably warm (any other person would say hot, but I'm weird like this). Perhaps it's just my weird sense of humour or that it's just smut but I found the beginning cute, the middle mildly amusing but still hot and the last bit just side bursting.

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worblehat May 20 2007, 06:11:08 UTC
I like the word warm, so no worries! I'm glad you found the fic to be the way you did, makes it sound like a fun read! (I don't tend to go back and re-read my own fic, I mean). Thanks so much for reading and I'm happy you enjoyed it. :)

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