Comments | worblehat: Making Me Nervous [Kyou Kara Maou! | Murata/Wolfram

worblehat

Making Me Nervous [Kyou Kara Maou! | Murata/Wolfram | R]

Dec 10, 2008 01:50

Title: Making Me Nervous
By: worblehat
Fandom: Kyou Kara Maou!
Pairing: Murata/Wolfram
Rating: R
Summary: Prompt was - Kyou Kara Maou, Wolfram/Murata: mistaken identity - "I'm sick of being told I look like him!"
Notes: Written for springkink. Self-beta'd.
Word count: 2,647

( Making Me Nervous )

medium, kkm, adult

Comments 8

starrose17 December 10 2008, 16:49:22 UTC

omg that so awesome!! The whole lines about the mirror, omg hot! XD

Plus the very first line that made me giggle-snort was:

"Then I'm just fondling you, I guess."

Yep, blunt as can be Murata LOL

worblehat December 10 2008, 19:34:48 UTC

I'm glad you thought so! I wasn't sure whether to write the mirror part or not, but then I just went with it. So to hear it worked is good times.

Hahah, I love him. ♥

Thanks for reading!

sommar December 11 2008, 19:40:02 UTC

oh my, when I first read what pairing it was I thought how the hell are you going to pull this off?... but you did!!!
I loved it!
Thank you for writing and sharing (and opening my eyes to this pairing XD)!

worblehat December 11 2008, 20:01:57 UTC

Oh, I've loved this pairing a while, so while it was a little challenging, the dialog helped and I just...went with it. I'm glad it worked! And was fun to read, ahahah.

You're welcome! Thanks for commenting, and giving this pairing a chance. I love Yuuri/Wolfram as well, but Murata's my favourite character, so I always feel like giving him a little love.

kookiety December 11 2008, 20:22:50 UTC

"Letting you feel my hair," answered Murata as if this was something everyone did, and Wolfram was the weird one for questioning it; keeping his hold firm.

Lol. I really like that line :)

Nice.
I haven't read many Murata/Wolfram fics (or that many KKM fics for that matter either) - so it was a sorta unusual pairing to read - interesting too (the mirror bit especially - now that is something I would have never guessed). It's definitely well written. I really liked it :)

worblehat December 11 2008, 22:25:34 UTC

Thanks for letting me know! I'm always interested in knowing what worked for readers. :)

Hahaha, I don't think there are many Murata/Wolfram fics out there - unless I've just missed them - so I can totally understand that. I'm glad you liked the mirror part, and that you gave this fic a chance! And ahaha, thanks for the kind feedback! ♥

eosrose January 8 2009, 06:41:06 UTC

You are made of win! ♥

worblehat January 9 2009, 17:22:16 UTC

Awww, thanks! Glad you liked the fic. ♥