Comments | worblehat: Perpetual Injuries [Kekkaishi | NC-17

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Perpetual Injuries [Kekkaishi | NC-17 | Hiura/Yoshimori]

Apr 24, 2009 04:27

Title: Perpetual Injuries
By: worblehat
Fandom: Kekkaishi
Pairing: Hiura/Yoshimori
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Hiura keeps getting injured and Yoshimori gets pissed off. Also, sex.
Notes: Written for word #103 @ 15_minute_fic. Pairing is denoted in alphabetic order. Self-beta'd.
Word Count: 5,748

( Perpetual Injuries )

long, kekkaishi, adult

Comments 10

tofubeast April 24 2009, 13:43:07 UTC

Oh my god, this. I loved how they were all written in character, and how Yoshimori's guilt about Gen and his issues with wanting to protect are written in.

TL;DR ILU for this. <3

worblehat April 24 2009, 15:28:52 UTC

Oh God, I'm just glad someone read this! Thank you so much, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I love the idea of Yoshimori as an adamant protector, so I'm also glad that worked.

Really, thank you! ♥

atashiwaabunai April 24 2009, 22:23:12 UTC

lol. I'm REALLY not into shounen-ai, and I'm an ESPECIALLY adamant Yoshi/Toki fan, but I wanted to let you know that I read all of it. Thank you for keeping Yoshimori in character, many fanfics do not. : )

worblehat April 25 2009, 01:37:22 UTC

Hahaha, I really appreciate that. I ship Yoshimori/Anyone, just because I love Yoshimori, but I know what it can take to read a pairing that's not yours, so seriously - thank you. I hope it was enjoyable. ♥

writingpickle May 4 2009, 13:00:26 UTC

Perfect. It's hard to be a faithful Yoshi/Gen shipper when half of the couple is dead. Sigh. But I like Hiura a LOT, as much as I like Gen, and hmmmm....thank you for this!

worblehat May 4 2009, 14:49:11 UTC

Hah, I know what you mean. I think Hiura has been a great addition, though, and I couldn't help shipping Yoshimori with him as well. Thanks for reading this [seriously, thank you! Not a lot of people seem to know Kekkaishi]. And I'm glad you enjoyed it!

writingpickle May 5 2009, 07:52:00 UTC

I know, it's such a shame that Kekkaishi isn't as popular as it should be because it's one HELL of a manga...=)

worblehat May 5 2009, 16:30:47 UTC

I'm extremely biased, but I feel the same! So many good characters, great plot development, amazing main character... yet so few people seem to be reading it. I don't get it!

jitsch May 10 2009, 13:33:55 UTC

Now that I have finally read volume 23 and 24 (and thus learned to know Hiura) I thought I might read this.

Wow, I love it. I'm not a crazy fangirl who ships everyone with everyone (and to be honest, my first impression of Kekkaishi was that you couldn't possible create any convincing Shônen-Ai-Couple), but this sounds just possible. There are some scenes that you can even recognize from the manga (like Yoshi not wanting anyone to die like Gen did or how he touches Hiura in the morning), which makes it even more convincing.

I really like your stile of writing. It's very well done.

There should be more good fanfictions like this. Well, ANY Kekkaishi fanfiction makes me happy... there are so scarce. It's sad so few people recognize what a wonderful, interesting, well-developed story Kekkaishi is.

Jitsch*

worblehat May 10 2009, 17:20:29 UTC

Thanks for coming back to this fic! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

I honestly wasn't really looking to ship anyone in Kekkaishi, but then certain scenes came to mind and I got this idea, so I just went with it.

Thanks! I've been writing fanfic for five years now, so I feel like my style has improved quite a lot in that time; there's still more things that can be developed, of course.

I'm with you on that one. I honestly don't understand why Kekkaishi isn't read by more people. It's one of the most amazing series I've read to date!

Thanks again for your comment. :)